Noldolantë by cuarthol
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Summary: Filk of Leonard Cohen's 'Hallelujah' A musical/poetic exploration of the Fall of the Noldor - 'Noldolantë' - from the discord sewn by Melkor to Fëanor's death. Major Characters: Major Relationships: Genre: Poetry Rating: General Warnings: Character Death |
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Chapters: 1 | Word Count: 236 |
Posted on 9 January 2023 | Updated on 9 January 2023 |
This fanwork is complete. |
Noldolantë
Read Noldolantë
I've heard there was a secret forge
Where you produced a mighty sword
Because of lies that Melkor used to dismay
You crafted helms with plumes of red
In jealous pride, your madness spread
But all you did was herald Noldolantë
Noldolantë
Noldolantë
Noldolantë
Noldolantë
You yearned for freedom to abide
In open lands you'd been denied
Because the Valar used the light to hold sway
But now the Trees have fallen dark
They seek to take your final spark
Your broken heart became the Noldolantë
Noldolantë
Noldolantë
Noldolantë
Noldolantë
You love was strong but deep you mourned
The memory of a mother scorned
Your father slain, and many more in that bay
You made an oath, you spoke a vow
You had to see it through somehow
It's a cold and it's a cruel Noldolantë
Noldolantë
Noldolantë
Noldolantë
Noldolantë
You let no doom prevent your path
Not blood of kin nor sea of wrath
For fear of treason, you were first to betray
A brother’s loyalty you spurned
For those you left you'd not return
But you could not escape the Noldolantë
Noldolantë
Noldolantë
Noldolantë
Noldolantë
In battle fell, consumed by fire
You left no body for a pyre
And with your dying words a curse you laid
For on your sons you set a snare
That none of them could hope to bear
The bitter fall recalled in Noldolantë
Noldolantë
Noldolantë
Noldolantë
Noldolantë
This is such a clever and…
This is such a clever and moving repurposing of this song.
But now the Trees have fallen dark
They seek to take your final spark
Your broken heart became the Noldolantë
Ooof.
((hug)) yeah. It was never…
((hug)) yeah. It was never going to be a 'happy' song.
I'm so glad you liked it <3
Ambitious, but you really…
Ambitious, but you really made it work as a song about Feanor and his brokenness!
It was a bit of an…
It was a bit of an accidental filk, tumblr had a post about Fëanor's secret forge and I don't know if it was just on my brain or what but my brain just made the connection and I thought the mood of the song worked (sadly) well for the topic.
So glad you enjoyed it!
Oooh!
Yes. The Noldolantë goes like this, the fourth, the fifth, the minor fall, the major lift…
The baffled king composing…
The baffled king composing Noldolantë :'(
Thank you so much for your comment!
Beautifully done!
Beautifully done!
<3
<3