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Oh I loved this!!  The descriptions were beautiful and I love how the music lured Luthien out almost like a pied piper figure.  But Melian's explanation of a remnant of an earlier story just had me grinning!  Wonderful!!

I liked this story and it made me smile! Lúthien, with her later love of dancing to Daeron's piping, seems a very appropriate character to encounter Tinfang Warble! And I like how Melian's explanations keep the mystery. "He only plays for the stars and himself." - I liked that line too!