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Oh this is marvellous!

(I'd not heard of a tritina before and of course had to look it up.)

I really love what you've crafted here, with the evolution of their story subtly echoed by the shifted repetition. Well done!

I love how the form (and the formality) reinforce what you are saying with this. Really effective and beautiful.