Autumn Crown by Flora-lass
Fanwork Notes
This poem was inspired by some gloriously-coloured leaves I recently saw near my home, and a conversation at Alliance of Arda about Thranduil's autumn crown. In my mind, this is the first time he's decorated his crown since becoming King.
Fanwork Information
Summary: An attempt at a sonnet for the Experimental challenge. Thranduil returns to Greenwood the Great, with a diminished army and without Oropher. Major Characters: Thranduil Major Relationships: Genre: Poetry Challenges: Experimental Rating: Creator Chooses Not to Rate Warnings: |
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Chapters: 1 | Word Count: 113 |
Posted on 8 November 2023 | Updated on 8 November 2023 |
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Autumn Crown
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Oh, how I wish that we had never left
Our forest home, our ancient Silvan-space!
For we return, of full two-thirds bereft
Without our King, whom I cannot replace.
We struggle north, so weary of the road
I long to care for all, still mourning him
Yet if I look behind, to ease their load
The horror fills me, and the sun grows dim.
But, far ahead, the trees come into view!
Greenwood the Great, aglow at summer's end
We will revive, and tend these lands anew
My father's realm is now mine to defend.
With leaves of yellow, red and golden-brown
I weave this hope into my autumn crown.
Oh this was both…
Oh this was both heartbreaking and lovely. Even for the sorrows it still ends hopeful, I love that! (yay, poetry <3!)
Thank you so much for…
Thank you so much for commenting! I loved writing it, and I'm glad you enjoyed the progression from sorrow to hope. Thranduil only really feels fit to be king once he's within sight of home.
Oh, I like how you handled…
Oh, I like how you handled the subject!
Good use of the poetic form!
Thank you! I really enjoyed…
Thank you! I really enjoyed the challenge (but I got quite tearful at times, too!)
What a lovely use of this…
What a lovely use of this form. Thranduil's voice is very clear, and the contrasting horror and hope is very well done. :)
Thank you so much - I really…
Thank you so much - I really appreciate your thoughts.
Beautifully written!
Beautifully written! And capturing the complex and often bewildering multifaceted nature of emotions and experiences...
Thank you so much - I'm glad…
Thank you so much - I'm glad some of that came across. Poor Thranduil. :(
How beautiful! I really love…
How beautiful! I really love the last couplet.
Thank you! The final two…
Thank you! The final two lines actually came to me first. :)
I love this, it is so sad,…
I love this, it is so sad, but beautiful too.
Thank you. :)
Thank you. :)
This really feels like…
This really feels like Thranduil! The despair at looking past and the need to tend what you have left for you, your people and your father. Amazing, I really felt that!
I'm so grateful for your…
I'm so grateful for your lovely comment, and very happy that you think I've found Thranduil's voice.
Lovely!
A very speaking sonnet!
How did I miss this comment?…
How did I miss this comment? Thank you so much!
Oh my 😭 This is so beautiful…
Oh my 😭 This is so beautiful and so sad and captures his grief so well.