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I already told you I liked this a lot during the beta, but the emendations you made made this flow much more smoothly, and I really like the descriptions you decided to include - without sacrificing any of the "problematic" (as per official stricture, at any rate) aspects of a triad relationship. 

(And it feels fitting that review #100 should go to one of my favourite writers here, too.)