The Watchfires Burned Low by cuarthol
Fanwork Notes
For the prompt All Along The Watchtower (Jimi Hendrix) - though the specific version which inspired this was the remixed version from Battlestar Galactica
Fanwork Information
Summary:
The Silmarillion - JRR Tolkien Major Characters: Fingolfin Major Relationships: Genre: General Challenges: New Year's Resolution, Turgon's Rock Opera Rating: General Warnings: |
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Chapters: 1 | Word Count: 201 |
Posted on 14 January 2024 | Updated on 15 January 2024 |
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The Watchfires Burned Low
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Winter, First Age 455
Fingolfin dabbed the edge of his mouth and set the napkin beside his plate. Fingon was speaking about trade with the Falas, but he was not listening. His gaze lingering instead on his empty wine glass, though he waved off the servant who came to refill it.
There was a foreboding in his heart which all the normalcy of the evening could not dislodge. Rising, he bid the lords remain and left to walk the ramparts beneath the moonless sky.
Winter had come early and howling winds swept across the plain, driving many into the hills to seek shelter. He regarded it as nothing; no winter of Beleriand could ever overshadow the bitter journey of their exile.
His thoughts came to rest upon the long line of watchtowers stretched across the land, Barad Eithel, Ost-na-Thuin, Himring... The mountains east of Ladros hid all that lay south of Lothlann, but he could see the flicker of lights from Dorthonion, though they were dimmed and few.
When Fingon came bearing a chalice of warmed cider held out like an offering, Fingolfin cupped his cheek and kissed his brow. Tomorrow he would send messengers to summon his nephews. Tomorrow.
Chapter End Notes
Ost-na-Thuin is my invented name for Angrod and Aegnor's fortress in Dorthonion.
Oh! And tomorrow was too…
Oh! And tomorrow was too late!
Very powerful scene!
And tomorrow was too late :(…
And tomorrow was too late :(
Thank you!
Oh god, my heart is tight…
Oh god, my heart is tight with foreboding! Excellent job building tension in this short piece.
Thank you!
Thank you!
Oof oh my goodness, what a…
Oof oh my goodness, what a foreboding, filled with tension piece! I love how unsettled Fingolfin already is, as though he could hear the change coming 😔💔
<3 Thank you
<3 Thank you
Oof, that last line! You've…
Oof, that last line! You've captured the calm before the Bragollach so vividly!
Thank you so much
Thank you so much
Ooh, such foreboding, but he…
Ooh, such foreboding, but he will be too late. The comment how the winters of Beleriand are never as cold as their journey through Helcaraxë was spot-on.
Thank you! <3
Thank you! <3
Oh my... and of course…
Oh my... and of course tomorrow will be too late.
(Also, I like both versions of the song, so I'm delighted to see you do something with them!)
Oh I enjoy both as well, but…
Oh I enjoy both as well, but the BSG has a certain extra tragic flair to it, I think. Anyway, very inspiring all the same. Thank you <3
ohhhhh very atmospheric, but…
ohhhhh
very atmospheric, but like in a slightly spooky and foreboding sense. I like the image of just being able to see a few lights blinking in Dorthonion in the darkness!
So glad the 'spooky and…
So glad the 'spooky and foreboding' came through! Just what I was going for. Thank you!