Flames by elennalore
Fanwork Notes
A delayed entry for Middle-earth is Multitudes challenge as a part of New Year's Resolution. I chose both prompts for March 26: Balrogs and Enslaved characters. Double drabble.
Fanwork Information
Summary: From an account of an enslaved Elf in Angband. Major Characters: Original Character(s), Balrogs Major Relationships: Genre: Fixed-Length Ficlet Challenges: Middle-earth Is Multitudes, New Year's Resolution Rating: Teens Warnings: Creator Chooses Not to Warn |
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Chapters: 1 | Word Count: 203 |
Posted on 27 January 2024 | Updated on 27 January 2024 |
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Flames
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The darkness wasn’t the worst thing in the caves. The tunnels of the mine were pitch-black, but the darkness was our hiding-place. Veins of silver glimmered in the light of our tiny lanterns, and it was the only light we had. There was no sky, there were no stars. Our feet were cold and our throats thirsty, but after a while the steady sound of pickaxes hitting the rock became almost comforting.
Whenever flames appeared at the end of the tunnel, illuminating the walls with corrupt light, the sound of picks ceased, and we blew out the lanterns. In darkness, we pressed against the bedrock, hoping that the dreadful spirit would not turn their attention to us. Like mice in the woods, we quivered in our hiding hole, hoping to avoid the eyes of a predator.
Sometimes we were lucky; we were petty slaves of no importance, and the Balrog had other things in mind as they passed through the caves. At times, though, a fiery whip would fly towards us, and one of us would stumble and fall in a frenzied escape attempt. We never talked about those who were thus taken, but we learned to fear the flames.
Chilling (regardless of…
Chilling (regardless of flames) and very evocative!
Thank you!
Thank you!
Ooof... yeah... the thralls…
Ooof... yeah... the thralls really do deserve more of our attention.
How terrible for them! Very…
How terrible for them!
Very effective use of their point of view.
Oh! :( Well done.
Oh! :(
Well done.
nooooo that's terrible! To…
nooooo
that's terrible! To see light in the darkness when bad things are about to happen :(