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What a lovely friendship between those two! Dirhaval's characterization is so appealing here. Beautiful descriptions, too. Poor Pengolodh, arriving with heart and feet in such a state, but they were nevertheless lucky to encounter Dirhaval right away.

The last three chapters especially squeezed my heart. I really felt for Pengolodh not wanting to be the keeper of everyone’s grief and memories. I love Dirhaval’s curiosity & eagerness to make connection with “his” Elf. Lovely little series and a great use of prompts. 

Oh this was beautiful!

I love how you intertwined those two lines and the cranes! I love watching the cranes when they pass overhead on their journey north or south because I happen to live in the middle where they don't stay. It's the sign that the seasons are changing and you captured that feeling of change so well!