Twinkle, Twinkle, Silmaril by Anérea
Fanwork Notes
For the anti-prompts, avoiding:
Motifs and Tropes: happy ending
Literary Techniques: interiority
Words and Letters: the word "star"
Fanwork Information
Summary: A reworking of Twinkle, Twinkle, Little Star Major Characters: Eärendil Major Relationships: Genre: Poetry Challenges: Dark Matter Rating: General Warnings: |
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Chapters: 1 | Word Count: 150 |
Posted on 11 March 2025 | Updated on 11 March 2025 |
This fanwork is complete. |
Twinkle, Twinkle, Silmaril
For my rhyming, I've chosen to use the more archaic spelling of "blessed", and I also discovered the word "swael" meaning to melt and run down like a candle or to waste away. It rhymes with "feel", Silmaril and Eärendil, since Tolkien said "i" is pronounced /i/ as in "machine" in both Sindarin and Quenya.
My favourite version of Twinkle, Twinkle, Little Star is by Jewel (so apt!) and you can listen to Jewel's official video on YouTube.
Most people are only familiar with the first verse, but it is a five stanza poem titled The Star written by Jane Taylo and first published in 1806.
Read Twinkle, Twinkle, Silmaril

Twinkle, twinkle, Eärendil,
How I wonder what you feel,
Up above Arda so high,
Shining hope down from the sky.
When Arien's blaze is gone,
When the black foe's reach seems long,
Then you shine your little light,
Twinkle, twinkle, all the night.
Then Elves and Men in the dark,
Thank you for your tiny spark;
They'd not know a hopeful glow,
If you did not twinkle so.
In the dark blue sky you sail,
A promise that Morgoth will fail,
For you brought into the West,
The sacred light that Varda blest.
'Tis your bright and tiny spark,
Shining estel in the dark,
For we know you'll ne'er swael,
Twinkle, twinkle, Silmaril.
Twinkle, twinkle, Eärendil,
How I wonder what you feel,
Alone above Arda so high,
Forever sailing through the sky.
Twinkle, twinkle, Eärendil,
How I wonder what you feel,
How I wonder what you feel.
Chapter End Notes
Big thanks to the SWG folks whose suggestions unstucked my too-literal brain struggling with how to use the prompts for art! This evolved from a concept using Himring's suggested prompt "dark is evil" expressed as an abstract painting from Elennalore's suggestion, before the "star" prompt got me thinking of Vingelot and the Silmaril, and then Twinkle Twinkle Little Star earwormed into my head and I ended up with a written piece anyway!
I'm quite happy with it, and it brought to mind an old favourite artist I've not listened to in over a decade. (I used to play this over and over for my baby nephew. Sweet memories.)
This turned out so lovely…
This turned out so lovely!
The art part looks gorgeous, and the poem scans so well that I'd try and sing it if my mic wasn't acting up in the last few days.
Stunning work!
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Thank you so much! Oh my gosh, I would absolutely love to hear you sing it! I think your voice would give it such a lovely resonance. Tell your mic I say it needs to start behaving itself!
I'm currently looking into…
I'm currently looking into purchasing a new one, my usual for voice calls is integrated into my headphones, and those are still good, so I'm investigating the options for an external one that I can connect to my laptop ideally via usb/usb-c.
Once I find something, I'll put this on the list to record!
Oooh, good luck with finding…
Oooh, good luck with finding a nice one! I've got a separate mic and I far prefer it to integrated ones. It's also got a nice fuzzy muffler which helps to cut out nice. It was supwr cheap too, a Bpya.
I love this! The art is…
I love this! The art is gorgeous and the poem is lovely--and delightfully in line with Tolkien's conceit that some of our modern songs and sayings originated in Middle-earth and are just now changed around a little bit. <33
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Oh Thank you! I'd not thought about an in-universe origin for it, so I'm delighted that you mentioned it.
How lovely! Both the art and…
How lovely! Both the art and the poem are beautiful, andi I love the idea that the familiar rhyme originated with Earendil and the silmaril bringing hope and comfort to folk on Earth. I'm due to become a grandmother soon, and I'll be sure to sing this to the little one. :)
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I'm so glad you like my version, thank you!
It's such a lovely calming, reassuring song and tune, I'm sure both you and your little grandchild will enjoy singing it. (If you sing the Eärendil version they'll be getting a very early start on The Silmarillion, and then I suddenly had this image of them arguing with their friends about which the real one iis. 😆)
I love what you did there! ✨⭐
I love what you did there! ✨⭐
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Thank you! I'm delighted you like it.
I realise that in addition to sparking it with your prompt suggestion, the way you sometimes adapt poems has made me aware of the possibility — and particular delight — of doing so. ♡
Ah, I really love this…
Ah, I really love this remake of the twinkle twinkle song! I think the song suits so well in the Silmarillion universe, and your version feels like an older, now almost forgotten version of it. Like alternative history. Nice adaptation.
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I'm delighted you like it, thank you so much! (I was listening to the song so much while I was writing, but I've now discovered that when it plays in my head, the lyrics have changed! 😆)