That's a great rendition of the Feanorians, Gamil! I really liked how unlike most fics, you made them stick to each other, obey their elders, and how you portrayed the spell-like effect of Celegorm's and Curufin's words. Also, your work shows that it does not necessarily take swearing and contemporary language to make a story work. I've only read the last chapter so far (I'm sure I read the previous ones some time ago, but will have to re-read them as I don't recall them by now), but the story looks very promising and canon-mindful. Definitely on my watchlist. :)

I'm enjoying this story so much, and I especially love hearing about the Feanorians. I'm enjoying your writing style as well. Looking forward to the next update!