Pack the Parcel by daughterofshadows, Idrils Scribe, Grundy

Fanwork Information

Summary:

A collection of stories for the Pass the Parcel prompt for the Holiday challenge!

If anyone else would like to join, contact Grundy to be added to the list of authors so you can add your chapter.

Major Characters: Original Female Character(s), Elwing, Nellas, Túrin

Major Relationships: Nellas & Túrin, Elwing & Nellas

Artwork Type: No artwork type listed

Genre:

Challenges: Holiday Party

Rating: General

Warnings:

Chapters: 3 Word Count: 1, 333
Posted on 23 November 2021 Updated on 4 January 2022

This fanwork is a work in progress.

Table of Contents

Sunny Days

This was inspired by NaryaFlame's Moodboard for the Old Forest, even though it is set in Doriath.

White Gulls

Nellas takes young Elwing to the beach

Endorenna utúlien

An unexpected meeting on the shores of Middle-earth

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What a lovely woodland scene! 

Except for the foreshadowing, of course!

With the Children of Hurin, that can never be far away.

Even though young Turin is so cheerful and open here.

 

Thank you for filling my wish with the prompt fill!

I also learned something here: I did not know about woods-poppy and it's so nice to think of these growing somewhere in Doriath!

A sunny view indeed. Enjoy it while you can, little Túrin!

(And I'd never heard of the yellow wood poppies so I did a search—how absolutely gorgeous! I can see them as a field of sunlight lying on the forest floor, back in the virgin days before Men mucked around with the environment.) 

 

I like the way you contrast their differing experiences of the same place, Nellas' grief for her lost beeches being expressed as loathing of the wild sea and too-bright sun, while Elwing is delighted and excited with the beach, and being able to speak with these new birds too. And with that unconscious magical ability little people have, she pulls Nellas with her into her mood. We get so caught up in the Matters of Great Import that we forget life is also made up of little moments like these.

I enjoyed the mood in this, and your subtle connection with Elwing through the gulls. It also led me to your earlier fic Et Eärello when Anorië leaves Elenna, so it was lovely to have that added background, knowing Elrond's presence on the beach is extra special to her.