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Oh god I'm posting porn.

This had me hollering with laughter, your summary made me want to read this piece of work.  As you state it yourself, I do think it can use a bit  more, to strike a nice balance between describing the action vs thoughts & emotions. You do cover this mostly from Ingwë's perspective (although from time to time you slip away to a different pov), so perhaps you could explore that more, see how that works.

I do love the idea of Ingwion and Fëanor being half-brothers... a lot :D As fior Míriel's height, you know... how about Galadriel, I think she also inherited much of Míriel herself.

Thank you so much!

It could certainly use some polishing. As for more, this was meant to be a oneshot pwp but tell that to the two chapters of the story about how Ingwe, Miriel and Finwe would up togetehr currently sitting infront of me. I'll definitely be coming back and exploring this more :D 

I reackon Ingwion and Feanor could be a epic pair of brothesr if they put their minds to it. As to Galadriel, she could definitely get her height from Miriel in this verse. The possibilities are endless.