Very nice--the choice of music goes very well with the vubrancy of your characterization of Luthien.

How lovely to see Nimloth in an entirely unviolent, unangsty situation! I really enjoyed the tenderness that runs through the whole piece. I also enjoyed their conversation, their speculation about the new light and Melian's motivations in holding things back. But above all, it's the gentleness and reassurance these two share that made me feel very happy while reading this. They deserve it so much!