The Witnesses by Himring
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A little piece for the Ancestors challenge
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Summary: Aragorn is told about his ancestors by those who saw them with their own eyes. Major Characters: Aragorn, Celeborn, Elrond, Galadriel, Glorfindel Major Relationships: Genre: Challenges: Ancestors Rating: General Warnings: |
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Chapters: 1 | Word Count: 265 |
Posted on 4 October 2017 | Updated on 4 October 2017 |
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Chapter 1
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"I was there," said Celeborn to Aragorn. "I saw them step out of the shadows of the forest together, hand in hand, Thingol and Melian, when we were no longer sure we were even waiting, still. I had never seen anyone like Melian the Maia and Elu, our Elu, seemed utterly changed."
"I was there," said Galadriel to Aragorn. "I visited my brother in Nargothrond, shortly after his return from Ossiriand, and there I met Balan, who was later known as Beor, forefather of Barahir and Beren and all that House. Beor was the first of your kind I had ever seen; before that, Men had been a rumour, half disbelieved."
"I was there," said Glorfindel to Aragorn. "I stood in a high place beside King Turgon when the great eagles, at Thorondor's command, set down young Huor and his brother, having rescued them from orcs. They were weary and cold, having been carried high through the upper air. They had no inkling where they were, until we told them, but they showed no fear! Those were brave boys!"
"You were there," said Aragorn to Elrond. "You were there, in Elros's time and in Elendil's, in Valandil's and in Arathorn's. I was proud at first when you revealed my ancestry to me, and it seemed to me I had been lifted up high, but now I am cast into doubt and it seems to me I am all but overshadowed by the great ones of the past. Who am I to you, beside my ancestry? Can you even tell me apart?"
"Estel," said Elrond, "I can."
(1) Comment by oshun for The Witnesses [Ch 1]
I love the cadence of this! Wonderful use of the short form!
Re: (1) Comment by oshun for The Witnesses [Ch 1]
Thank you very much, Oshun!
I'm glad the cadence I was aiming for appeals to you!
(2) Comment by Lyra for The Witnesses [Ch 1]
As you may have guessed, the weight of all these ancestors - both Elven and mortal - on the shoulders of the later line of Elros is something that I've been chewing on lately, so this fic ran in an open door with me! Wonderful reaction from Elrond (who is probably famliar with the feeling, although the list of (in)famous ancestors is a lot shorter for him). Once again, you say so much in so few words.
Re: (2) Comment by Lyra for The Witnesses [Ch 1]
Thank you! Good to hear that the subject plays into your concerns!
Yes, Elrond does know the feeling or something like it, although he's also had time to get used to it! As Aragorn does as well, later on, I suppose.
I'm glad you like Elrond's reaction!
(3) Comment by Robinka for The Witnesses [Ch 1]
On one hand, it must have been intimidating to have all those greats (and not-so-greats ;)) as the ancestors. But on the other hand, it's a pity I don't have anybody who could tell me, "Oh, I was there when your great- great- great- great ... grandfather did this or that". Eh.
Lovely read, very thought-provoking. Thank you :)
Re: (3) Comment by Robinka for The Witnesses [Ch 1]
Yes, although it was intimidating, those witnesses must also have been fascinating to listen to!
And there's certainly things I would like to know about my ancestors.
Thank you very much for reading and for your comments!
(4) Comment by ziggy for The Witnesses [Ch 1]
LOvely last line especially. I like the poetic devices, like the repetition etc.
Re: (4) Comment by ziggy for The Witnesses [Ch 1]
Thank you very much, ziggy!
I'm glad you like the structure of this piece and that the last line worked for you!
(5) Comment by hennethgalad for The Witnesses [Ch 1]
poor Aragorn... and poor Elrond, who has studied mortals alot more closely than Lindir ever did. now i'm seeing Elrond wondering if Elros is still alive after five centuries...
also, structurally, i like the fairy-tale style, and of course the nice and accurate words you used within it !
Re: (5) Comment by hennethgalad for The Witnesses [Ch 1]
Poor Aragorn, yes. Although I believe he adjusts quite well, eventually, it can't have been easy at first.
And Elrond has had his losses, and more yet to come.
I'm glad you liked the style, thank you!
Aw, poor young Aragorn -…
Aw, poor young Aragorn - that's a lot of ancestors to live up to!
Yes, it is a lot to live up…
Yes, it is a lot to live up to!
And book Aragorn seems to handle that with aplomb, most of the time, but it seemed to me that even he, in his youth, might have had moments of self-doubt.