Cúthalion by Narya
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Summary: In Doriath, Túrin and Beleg practice archery. A drabble. Slash. Major Characters: Beleg, Túrin Major Relationships: Genre: Fixed-Length Ficlet, Romance, Slash/Femslash Challenges: Rating: General Warnings: |
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| Chapters: 1 | Word Count: 92 |
| Posted on 6 October 2017 | Updated on 6 October 2017 |
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Chapter 1
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The arrow missed the target and thocked into the grass.
“Thou art flinching on the release.” Beleg laid gentle fingertips on the youth's string hand. “Relax.” He moved to stand behind and to the side, so close that Túrin's dark hair tickled his cheek. “I will direct your next shot.”
Túrin leaned into Beleg's guidance as he raised and drew the bow. Through the gauzy shirts, Beleg felt the youth's muscles tauten – but Túrin paused and closed his eyes.
“Thou art beautiful, Cúthalion.”
The arrow's fletching feathers brushed against the corner of Beleg's mouth as he smiled.
(1) Comment by oshun for Cúthalion [Ch 1]
Wow! Fanning myself! This is steamy! In such a few words. Gotta admit I have a long-lasting fascination with the relationship between Beleg and Turin.
I see a hint here of an mild transgressive element which only makes it hotter.
Re: (1) Comment by oshun for Cúthalion [Ch 1]
Oh, thank you! This is heavily inspired by Spiced Wine's take on the characters; it's an older piece of mine and I don't seem to be very good at sustaining the archaic language for more than a drabble. But I'm thrilled you liked it :)
Very sensual. I can really…
Very sensual. I can really visualize this. Lovely depiction in few words.
Elfscribe, I'm so sorry, I…
Elfscribe, I'm so sorry, I never got a notification about this comment! Thank you for taking the time to read, and for letting me know you liked it.