Maglor's Lament by Fadesintothewest
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Summary: Maglor's Lament. Whether he drowned or wanders he is nevertheless lost. Major Characters: Maglor Major Relationships: Genre: Poetry Challenges: Rating: Teens Warnings: |
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Chapters: 1 | Word Count: 308 |
Posted on 20 January 2014 | Updated on 20 January 2014 |
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Chapter 1
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Maglor’s lament
The power of the water renders your defenses useless
It mocks any attempt to think of yourself as powerful
And it pours forth
all your sadness, your grief
Called by the ceaseless pull of the moon on the water
Surging, filling you, drowning you
You are laid naked
The waves gentle- murmur, whisper, ensnare
In the pit of your stomach
Heavy black
Lays your faithlessness
Your sorrow
That which you keep hidden underneath a thin veil of skin
If you look closely it protrudes
A foot pushing through the delicate netting
Reminding you “I am here”
Gone is the wonder, the magic
Gone is any belief in hope
Gone is your love, your presence
Your absence overwhelming
How cruel life given
How cruel is consciousness
How cruel is it when the world reveals the certainty of death
And my love for you was like a challenge to the winds
The sun and moon above
Though my envy is fickle without reason and entirely selfish
How could creation dare give life to a fire so bright, special, beautiful
To only extinguish it
No we are not who we imagine ourselves to be
We build temples and idols with the hopes of not finding that which dwells beneath the veil
Nameless faith we harken to thee
Witless children lost at sea
Laid bare by the depths of the waters
We cling to the memories of our fathers
And I here I stand, my shame birthed
The darkness piercing through that veil I spent an entire life weaving and stretching around me
Only to find that I no longer matter
Only a thought, a memory in the Feckless night
And then i am gone
I breathe no more
A memory lost at shore.
(1) Comment by Independence1776 for Maglor's Lament [Ch 1]
This is unsettling. I like it!
Re: (1) Comment by Independence1776 for Maglor's Lament [Ch 1]
Thank you for the review! I am glad that you didn't mind being unsettled :-)