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It's beautiful, sinister, and atmospheric. I need a translation--sorry, I am not sure what is happening here! I do guess that it is melian and ungoliant each trying to udo the others magic/webs? I guess I am not very poetic unless it is entirely obvious. But here hangs this beautiful language and no one commented! So I had to!

Thank you for reading and commenting! Honestly, it's sometimes too easy for me to get so caught up in language/description in Silmfic that I forget about plot haha. I was writing from Ungoliant's POV and trying to keep the ending purposefully ambiguous, but my thought was that this was specifically about the Girdle - Melian weaving, Ungoliant un-weaving - and it ends with the Girdle fallen and Melian captured - possibly killed, possibly swayed to Ungoliant's side somehow.