Song to the Evening Star by Zdenka

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Fanwork Notes

Written for the Multifandom Drabble Exchange 2018.

Fanwork Information

Summary:

As evening falls, Tar-Míriel's faithful handmaiden awaits her return in her chambers. (Sapphic verse. Tar-Míriel/OFC.)

Major Characters: Original Female Character(s), Tar-Míriel

Major Relationships:

Artwork Type: No artwork type listed

Genre: Fixed-Length Ficlet, Poetry, Romance, Slash/Femslash

Challenges:

Rating: Teens

Warnings: Sexual Content (Mild)

Chapters: 1 Word Count: 200
Posted on 16 July 2018 Updated on 16 July 2018

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Chapter 1

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Come, my queen, the brightest of stars is rising.
Gradually the heat of the day is fading;
flower-scented breezes with gentle touches
stir through the curtains.

Leave the court where venomous gossips whisper;
come to your own chambers, your peaceful refuge,
come and find the dearest of all your handmaids
kneeling before you.

Let me take the gem from your brow and loosen
every layer and sash of your royal garments,
pin by pin releasing your night-dark tresses
till they flow freely.

Come, my queen, the brightest of stars is rising;
yet to me the light of your eyes is brighter,
dearer than the jewels of Elentári
shining in heaven.

Let my hands relieve you of pain and sorrow;
let me draw the water, attend your bathing,
comb your long wet hair till it’s sleek and shining,
coax out the tangles.

Be not distant, come to me, let me see you!
Let my lips be pressed against yours, my fingers
trace along the curves of your skin, your nearness
fill all my senses.

See, soft wings of darkness enwrap the palace
(yet, above, the brightest of stars is rising);
come, my queen, my Míriel, I await you,
breathless with longing.


Chapter End Notes

Elentári: Star-queen, an epithet of Varda


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