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Oh! You're conveying the oppressive atmosphere of the impending storm and the horrid discovery of the burned messengers very effectively. I could almost imagine the stench, too!
I love the idea of Lalwen as an expert biologist (and Fingon her student!), and I love how she is aware of the natural dangers brought by the storm, while she has no idea (yet?) what they're up against. Looking forward to the next chapter!