Burn by Lferion
Fanwork Notes
Thanks go to Zana, Morgynleri & Runa for encouragement & sanity-checking.
Quote: "It was a pleasure to burn." ~ Ray Bradbury, Fahrenheit 451f
Fanwork Information
Summary: Two drabbles on burns hot and cold, pleasurable and productive. Major Characters: Fingon Major Relationships: Genre: Fixed-Length Ficlet Challenges: Start to Finish Rating: General Warnings: |
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Chapters: 1 | Word Count: 200 |
Posted on 3 November 2019 | Updated on 3 November 2019 |
This fanwork is complete. |
Burn
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It was a pleasure to burn, after being so cold for so long. Of course, cold burned as well, ice leaving blackened skin burning and numb as any fire-blister, and that was a sensation that Findekáno would not soon forget. But to turn one's face to this new, bright, warm light, to feel its beams hot on eyelids and cheeks and lips, heat reaching as deep as had the Ice, thawing things long lain frozen. Giving light and life back to some very dark places indeed. Warming more than bodies. But this Light would have its own dangers also.
It was a pleasure to burn in other ways as well: to feel the heat of intimate desire as an ember, a flame in one’s belly, heart, parts, flushed and eager. The itch and prickle in one’s fingers, palms, wrists to Make, for the art and joy of it, not merely Need. To stoke the forge-fire, the cook- and hearth-fire for joy, gladness in the doing, the working, the serving forth and the being together that was more than just survival. To burn with the fury of battle with the Enemy himself, and not the fraught struggle against his ancient work.
(1) Comment by Himring for Burn
I like this glimpse of Fingon raising his face to the New Sun and the reflections that spin out and away from that moment.
Re: (1) Comment by Himring for Burn
Thank you so much!
(2) Comment by Lyra for Burn
Great use of the prompt! It's a very Noldorin sentiment to be sure, and I love that you interpreted it through Fingon's eyes, rather than one of the Feanorians.
Re: (2) Comment by Lyra for Burn
Thank you!
(3) Comment by Lilith for Burn
Terrific use of the prompt and wonderful play with the different possibilities of what it means for something’ to burn.
Re: (3) Comment by Lilith for Burn
Thank you!
(4) Comment by Grundy for Burn
That's an interesting juxtaposition of different meanings of burn. Nicely done!
Re: (4) Comment by Grundy for Burn
Thank you so much!
(5) Comment by oshun for Burn
This is lovely. Like a poem, which is what I think all of the best drabbles are.
Re: (5) Comment by oshun for Burn
Thank you so much! I agree, drabbles really are a kind of prose-poem. Every word matters.