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Oh this was so sad! :'( I absolutely loved the idea that Uinen would try to keep going back in time to save Míriel, wondering if one day she just didn't have enough strength, letting her die </3 It was also very interesting reading about the "initiation" cult for Uinen and all the details involved. I also wondered what would Uinen be thinking when Míriel took part in it. Had she been watching her from the distance? Was she also in love, or it was Míriel returning the kiss that caught her off guard? Anyway, it was a delightful, if sad, read! <3  

I am so glad you liked it! (and felt sad Xd.) To be honest, I didn’t really consider what Uinen was thinking while Miriel reformed the ritual. perhaps she was watching from the distance? I don’t think she was really in love yet (at least, not in the original timeline,) but she was always happy to oblige a beautiful woman kissing her. And then she fell in love along the way...