Thank you for the review :)

I am not suprised there were spelling and grammar errors to be fair, I never found a beta that worked for me on poetry. On stories I have been lucky enough to have some of the best and Eveiya who is now kindly betaing for me may be a good option for poetry as well. Despite being a long time lit student I admit that when I write I pay very little attention to formal things likes meters and other technicalities, it needs to feel and sound right in my head before I am happy with it.