Victim of the Unlight by Alassante

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Fanwork Notes

2009 MEFA 2nd Place Winner, Races: Elves: House of Finwe

 

 

A/N Thanks so much to Viv, Sulriel, and Rhyselle for their help in editing this piece!

Wirilomë – Quenya for Ungoliant
Maitimo – Quenya for Maedhros

 

 

Fanwork Information

Summary:

Finwe was the first elf killed in Valinor. This is about his final moments.

Written for ALEC's October Challenge - Death and Undead Things

2009 MEFA 2nd Place Winner, Races: Elves: House of Finwe

Major Characters: Finwë, Melkor, Ungoliant

Major Relationships:

Artwork Type: No artwork type listed

Genre: Drama

Challenges:

Rating: General

Warnings: Character Death

Chapters: 1 Word Count: 848
Posted on 3 January 2009 Updated on 3 January 2009

This fanwork is complete.

Victim of the Unlight

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Wirilomë – Quenya for Ungoliant

Maitimo – Quenya for Maedhros

 



Finwë could taste death in his throat, but he swallowed it viciously and clawed his way across the blood-slick stone. His mortal wounds drained his essence, fea aching to flee his ravished hroa. He had to stop Melkor from taking the Silmarils. His sword lay nearby and he reached for it, then grasping the hilt of it. On his hands and knees, he crawled to a chair and pulled himself up, ignoring the agony that racked his body.

Stumbling toward the hall, Finwë listened to the sounds in the house and knew that Melkor and Wirilomë were approaching. He pressed himself against the wall to stablize himself. Melkor would think him dead so he had little time to press his advantage of a surprise attack. Glancing down, he saw the blood flowing freely from his wounds, leaving a trail of blood back to where he had fallen.

‘I will not last the night.’ He had no time to say farewell to those he loved.

Finwë did not have time to dwell on this fact before he felt the darkness of the fallen Vala, suffocatingly cold and heavy, surround him long before he saw Melkor and Wirilomë. Throwing himself in their path, he swung his sword at the neck of his foe. Melkor barely blinked before he grabbed the sword and flung it away, knocking Finwë off center. Grasping the elf lord by the throat, Melkor held him off his feet and laughed. Finwe grasped at his fingers desperately trying to breathe as he felt his windpipe crushing and darkness bordered the edges of his vision. Melkor, no doubt a master at tempered violence, seemed to know exactly how tightly he could squeeze without the elf passing out from lack of air so he could torture the elf further.

“You think you can defeat me? I am more powerful than you could even dream.” Melkor’s voice boomed over the sound of his heart pounding in his ears.

“Feanáro will stop you. He will rip you to shreds for what you have done. The full wrath of the Valar will aid him in this…” Finwë gasped as Melkor’s fingers tightened on his throat.

Melkor flung the elf across the room as if he were weightless. Finwë crashed into a table before he hit the wall. Sliding into a heap of broken bones and gaping wounds, he bit his lip to avoid crying out. He would not allow Melkor see any weakness. Looking up, he saw the Vala’s face twisted in cruel victory. Despite his best effort, he now shook in fear as he saw the true face of evil incarnate.

“You are now broken, elf, and soon you will draw your last breath. Realize that as you do, I have now claimed the greatest creations of the Noldor as my own. You are nothing, unable to defend your home nor your honor – less than a buzzing insect in my way. I fear not Feanáro, nor the Valar for I alone improved the song of Ilúvatar. And now we destroyed the Two Trees that the Valar hold most beloved, they will be licking their wounds, not attempting to stop me. Feanáro is nothing but a brilliant craftsman. I am He Who Has Arisen in Might! I would strike him down as easily as I have you.” Melkor laughed again before adding. “Go now, Finwë. Join your wife who chose to fade rather than look upon the son she had brought into the world. She knew even then that he would prove the ruin of the Noldor, dividing them forever to serve his own means.”

Melkor turned and followed Wirilomë from the keep into the darkness. Finwë's breath rattled in his lungs, agony filling every inch of his body. He could no longer move and all the fight left in him crept away in the darkness. He watched in detached calm the puddle of blood growing below him.

The Trees were destroyed, the Silmarils stolen into the night. What was left of peace in these lands? Hope was lost. Tears of regret stained his cheeks as he tried to will himself to let go. He knew his son would fight to his dying breath to regain the Silmarils. He had failed by letting Melkor take them from this house. He had failed as the King of the Noldor. He had failed his family. His blood so carelessly flowing from his body was not strong enough to substain his life anymore.

‘Miriel, I come to you now as I have often wanted to do before. Please forgive me for my weakness and misdeeds.’


Even as his fëa left him, called to the Halls of Mandos, Finwë’s death was just being discovered. His oldest grandson, Maitimo, held his lifeless body as he cried out and cursed the one who brought this death upon their house. He died ignorant of what madness his death and the loss of the Silmarils would lead the Noldor to commit. Soon he would be joined by the many Teleri slaughtered upon the swords of the House of Finwë. 


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Oooooh, this is nice! Well, erm, not nice in the sense that it is about one of the saddest moments of the Noldor but so well-written: dark and intense with some moments of foreshadowing that make me wince for knowing how it will really turn out. ("The full wrath of the Valar will aid him in this." Eep!)

The first line is excellent. I love to be plunged into a story like this. That he swallows viciously changes the feel of the whole sentence: I don't pity him or even worry for him. He is still fighting. I want to read on.

This line made me wubble: "‘I will not last the night.’ He had no time to say farewell to those he loved."

This is a great image: "He watched in detached calm the puddle of blood growing below him."

Again, very nicely done. I've been wanting to read this for a few days now. I'm glad I got the chance to. :)

Sorry for the late response. I think my spam filter snagged this review! I'm glad you liked it. I thought Finwe's death would have to have been horrifying not only because he was killed by Morgoth but also because it was the first death in Aman. Er...unless you count his wife but she chose to fade. Sadly this death was only the beginning :( Thanks for the review!