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Guh, ummm, wow.  

Very, very well done.  And since you've reduced me incoherent rambling, I'll leave you with some Milton you no doubt know well. 

Into this wild abyss the wary fiend 

Stood on the brink of Hell and look'd a while,

Pondering his voyage; for no narrow firth

He had to cross. 

And you've reduced me to a fit of incoherent squeeing with those verses taken from one of my favorite passages in PL!  Those verses are so bloody appropriate.

Thanks so much!  This ficlet was spawned this morning over my second cuppa Tanzanian medium-roast.  It may very well become the centerpiece of a chapter in Eregion (if I still have the energy and guts to tackle that).  If that chapter ever materializes, I can see it titled "Into This Wild Abyss." :^)  *Shiver*  Milton has a way with words.

Thanks muchly, Rhapsy! Glad to know that you noted that moment of hesitation followed by that supremely arrogant confidence which indicates (my version of) Sauron is in character.\r\n\r\nIn my \'verse, Melkor can scream all he wants. No sound\'s going to get past that accretion disk. ;^)

Thanks, Binka!  You know, I actually have a picture painted in my head of this scene, but executing it is another matter.  Maybe once I complete my "legendarium" I should take a class or two to reactivate my art n' design sensibilities and illustrate my own work! :^D  But for now, I'll just "paint" with words. 

I have goosebumps! This is just wonderful, not happy-skipping-tra-la-lally wonderful, but dark and evocative and definitely thought-provoking wonderful. :^D That brief moment in the middle where Sauron shows that he has doubts somehow make the physicality of it worse in the end; it's so much easier when he's not sympathetic.

Beautiful writing, as always. :)

Thanks so much, Dawn!  Although writing a villain with a conscience and self-doubt presents its own challenge, I think it poses a greater hurdle for many -- but thankfully not all - readers.  

Pssst..have a look at Binka's illustration of the fic.  It's fantastic!

"I really, really want to see you write up the Sauron/Finrod song-duel from Sauron's point of view sometime..."

Be assured the dark muse has already nattered at me about that.  It just needs to be properly translated to MS Word. :^)

Thanks again, Raksha!