Hostage by SurgicalSteel

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Summary:

Ar-Pharazon takes Sauron as a hostage for the good behavior of his people.

Major Characters: Amandil, Ar-Pharazôn, Sauron

Major Relationships:

Artwork Type: No artwork type listed

Genre: Drama

Challenges: Akallabêth in August

Rating: Teens

Warnings: Expletive Language

Chapters: 1 Word Count: 2, 071
Posted on 17 August 2009 Updated on 17 August 2009

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Hostage

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I did not want to make war in Middle-earth. Númenor has problems enough of its own, with the all-too frequent clashes between those who label themselves ‘Faithful’ and those who truly are faithful to their homeland. Amandil and his followers will never forgive me for marrying Zimraphel and for ruling with her – they have spread the rumor among themselves that I forced her. Perhaps we did marry a bit more quickly than she would have liked, for her father was barely cold in the ground – but she agreed that it was necessary if we wished to avoid more open conflict between the Elf-friends who would have forced her into a marriage with Amandil’s brother and made her a figurehead, and the King’s Men who would have seen her dead and me on the throne.

What I have done, I have done for her, even to this. I did not want to come back to Middle-earth. I rule an island. Sauron is no threat to me unless he conquers a coastal port, and that was my answer each time Amandil suggested I should take action against Mordor. His announcement that he had seen troop movements from Mordor toward Umbar seemed too convenient, and I would have summarily dismissed them as yet another rumor, yet another attempt to have me safely out of Númenor.

And then Zimraphel asked in her calm, quiet voice, “Can we afford to take the chance?”

“I cannot afford to leave Amandil here unchecked,” I said.

“Then take him with you,” she said, “but do not risk losing Umbar. Belfalas is essentially independent; Lond Daer is a haven for the Elf-friends. Of the major settlements, Umbar is the only one loyal…”

“The oligarchs of Umbar are principally loyal to their own purses, not to us,” I said.

“Better loyal to their own purses than loyal to our rivals or conquered by your enemies,” Zimraphel answered. “Do not risk losing Umbar,” she added more firmly.

She was right, and I knew that she was right, and so the orders were given. The Elf-friends were conscripted over Amandil’s loud protests, for Zimraphel was right about taking the opposition with me rather than leaving it behind – and we sailed for Middle-earth. I anticipated a hard fight with Mordor’s forces, and so I thought to conscript more men in Umbar. To my chagrin, the city had been evacuated save for the women who were members of the council of oligarchs and their children. The Abârî Azrubêl, one of their elected ‘Judges,’ coolly informed me that she had no intention of allowing Umbar to be dragged into a conflict not of their making – and then looked me up and down dismissively and casually remarked, “I rather expected the king of Númenor to be taller.”

“And I rather expected that the elected leaders of Umbar would not need to stoop to such pettiness,” I replied, and I was somewhat pleased to note that she flushed slightly at the rebuke. “You are still a colony of Númenor, Abârî, and so your evacuation of your able-bodied men could be taken as treason…”

“There is no need for this invasion,” she retorted.

“Rumor has it that Mordor’s forces…” I said.

“And from whom did you hear these rumors?” she asked.

I was forced to admit that the source was the unverified visions in Amandil’s palantíri, and at that, her eyes narrowed, and she said, “I’ll make you this offer. Leave one of their men with us – one who would know the truth or falsehood of these rumors firsthand, preferably. Should he convince us, and should you need the additional men, I will send them.”

It was on the tip of my tongue to tell her that I would not bargain for the service of men that I had every right to compel – and yet, I realized I could potentially play this to my advantage. I needed Amandil and Elendil with me to keep their folk in line. But Elendil’s sons? They were old enough to come with us from Númenor, but were serving more as aides to their father and grandfather than as military commanders. They could be left behind – and should their relatives misbehave, there was no need to collect them once this campaign was over. “Elendil’s sons,” I offered.

She grinned back at me. “I will house them with my own children, and they will be treated honorably,” Azrubêl said.

I advised Amandil and Elendil that the two young men would be staying in Umbar to negotiate for additional support from the oligarchs – and both gave me narrow-eyed stares, but neither actually said that they did not believe me.

It seemed worse than madness to remain in Umbar, pinned against the sea on one side and a not-entirely friendly city on the other, and so we journeyed inland until I found terrain that I thought was defensible, and made camp, and sent out scouts to determine exactly where the enemy might be. Waiting is the worst part of any military campaign, and is filled with uncertainty and doubt. Were the stories Amandil had told true? If they were, how large would be the enemy force? And if not – had he somehow been misled? Could this perhaps be a trap? It this was a trap, then who sought to trap me? The Elf-friends or Sauron?

A week passed, and then another, and I could sense Amandil growing nervous as we continued to find no evidence of an enemy to engage. Finally, as a third week came toward a close, we received word that an enemy party was approaching under a flag of parley, of all things. “An army about to attack Umbar?” I asked Amandil. “Quite a difference from a small party looking to negotiate.”

“I know what I saw,” Amandil said, stubbornly clinging to his story.

“Convenient that no one outside your household can confirm this story,” I said, and Amandil winced, but said nothing further as the enemy party came within our view. From the obvious deference shown to the leader of this group of black-clad men, I initially thought that he must be some high-ranking lieutenant of Sauron’s. I was puzzled by this, for he seemed to have that sense of ‘otherness’ about him that I had seen in the few elves I have met, and I could not imagine an elf becoming a lieutenant of his. Then I noticed the strange glimmer of his eyes that spoke of something even older, something of the Fay, and a glint of gold surrounding his index finger confirmed my suspicion.

This was not a lieutenant of Sauron, but Sauron himself.

He addressed Amandil initially, speaking to my old friend as if he were the king, asking why it was we had come as invaders to his land. Amandil, for his part, was so startled that he did not respond – and I chose to wait patiently.

“I have made no moves to attack your lands,” he said, and Amandil began turning red. “I have sent my forces into lands to the East, certainly, but only out of a desire to help the people there, to make their lives easier and more peaceful. I have not moved against any of the lands of Númenor…”

“Perhaps only because you wished first to consolidate your position,” I said.

He looked at me, the same sort of dismissive assessment I had seen from the Abârî in Umbar. “You allow your servants to speak while you remain silent?” he said to Amandil.

“In his own home, the Lord Amandil of Andúnië likely does not allow such liberties,” I said. “But I am not his servant. I am his king.

One eyebrow rose, and there was a hint of amusement about his eyes and the corners of his mouth. “I expected the great king Ar-Pharazôn to be…” he began, and then he stopped himself.

I suspected he was attempting to bait me, and I was determined not to rise to that bait. “Taller. I know,” I said, and the corners of his mouth briefly quirked upward. “You were going to move against Umbar,” I said, making it a statement rather than a question.

“I thought they – at your behest – might move against me,” he said in tones of innocent affront.

“You know better. You know their principal loyalty is to their own purses,” I replied.

“I only seek to improve their lives,” he said.

“You would have driven them into the sea, and then come to Númenor.”

He shook his head. “I have been discussing irrigation systems for their farmlands with them, but invasion? Why would I…?”

It occurred to me for a bare moment that Amandil might well have been wrong and that he might have actually had a benign intent, and then I recalled what the histories told us of Ost-in-Edhil and I asked, “Were the farmers of Eregion grateful for your aid?”

There was a flicker of something in his eyes then, something like rage and madness mixed, and although it was quickly suppressed, I did not wish to see that look again. “They were in the beginning,” he said in clipped tones.

“And how do I know that an offer of aid to my citizens will not ultimately lead to an invasion?” I asked.

“I will give you my word,” he said.

“I will need more than that,” I snapped.

One of the men in his party grumbled something about disrespect, and I could hear my own men murmuring that he seemed more reasonable than I did, and so I continued, “You have no reason to love Númenor or its people – did we not aid your enemies in Eriador?”

“Your ancestors did,” he said reluctantly. “But you are not your ancestors. I am willing to look past those unfortunate events.”

I shook my head again. “I am not certain that I believe that. I require your oath…” I hesitated for a moment as that hint of madness flared in Sauron’s eyes again, but then persisted. “I cannot take the chance that you may attack my people. I will require your oath.”

He remained silent for several moments, and the muscles along his jawline clenched and unclenched.

“My ancestors drove you out of Eriador. I can, if necessary, drive you so far to the East that you will fall into the Encircling Sea,” I stated.

He snorted at that, but then said in flat tones, “I suppose that great kings must have their will,” and fell to his knees in front of me and began speaking his oath.

Too easy, I thought, and so as he finished his oath, I said, “I will also require a hostage.”

“He has none he could give,” one of his men said, and then stopped mid-sentence as Sauron raised his hand. The look of stark terror on that man’s face confirmed for me that Sauron was capable of hideous acts even against those who gave him their loyalty.

“He has himself,” I said.

There was a moment of anger on Sauron’s face followed by resignation and almost eagerness. “If I have offended you by my actions, I ask for your pardon,” he said.

“For myself, I might grant it, but not for my people,” I said. “You will come back to Númenor with us as a hostage,” I began. I stopped for a moment, wondering what threat might command the submission of his people, and then my eyes fell on Amandil. “If any of your people threaten my people again, I will hand you over to the Lord of Andúnië, to be disposed of as he sees fit.”

Amandil’s tight grin at that statement said without words what he would do with Sauron should that come to pass – Amandil would hand Sauron over to the Noldor still remaining in Eriador, who would either take their revenge for Eregion on him personally or would hand him over to the Valar.

“It is a hard doom,” Sauron said, “but great kings must have their will.” He held out his arms, wrists together, and allowed himself to be chained.

Before he rose to his feet, before my soldiers led him away, I leaned down and whispered into his ear, “Fuck with me and I will destroy you.”

His only response was, “I understand you,” which sent a shiver of foreboding down my spine.


Chapter End Notes

Author's Notes:

The initial inspiration for this notion was a conversation on Pandemonium’s LJ about the television program ‘Kings’ (alas, cancelled!). Ian McShane plays ‘King Silas’ so marvelously that we agreed he’d be a wonderful candidate to play Ar-Pharazôn. I think Pandemonium made a remark about his height and that led to a discussion on ‘how do we know the guy was tall’ and on various historical emperors and dictators who weren’t. His final threat to Sauron is an homage to another character played by McShane: Al Swearengen in ‘Deadwood.’

My take on Pharazôn and Míriel/Zimraphel’s marriage was inspired by this passage in ‘The History of the Akallabêth’ in History of Middle-earth Volume XII: The Peoples of Middle-earth:

And now it came to pass that her father Tar-Palantír grew weary of grief and died, and as he had no son the sceptre came to her, in the name of Tar-Míriel, by right and the laws of the Númenóreans. But Pharazôn [?arose] and came to her, and she was glad, and forsook the allegiance of her father for the time, being enamoured of Pharazôn. And in this they broke the laws of Númenor that forbade marriage even in the royal house between those more nearly akin than cousins in the second degree. But they were too powerful for any to gainsay them. And when they were wedded she yielded the sceptre to Pharazôn, and he sat upon the throne of Elros in the name of Ar-Pharazôn the Golden, but she retained also her title as hers by right, and was called Ar-Zimrahil.

Sauron’s statement that ‘Great kings must have their will’ comes from ‘The Tale of Years of the Second Age,’ also from HoMe XII.

On the men of Umbar evacuating – the Akallabêth states that …men saw his sails coming up out of the sunset, dyed as with scarlet and gleaming with red and gold, and fear fell upon the dwellers by the coasts, and they fled far away. In my ‘verse, the people of Umbar have been there long enough to have established a form of government resembling that of Ancient Carthage. Their elected leaders aren’t at all certain that they want to be dragged into a war, and so they send the conscriptable men as far enough away to make things difficult for Ar-Pharazôn (although likely close enough that they could get back to their homeland to defend it if need be). The title ‘Abârî’ for these leaders was invented by Pandemonium.


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SQUEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!! "flails and screeches like a rabid fan girl"

You have no idea how much I absolutely love this, Steel! I was ecstatic to see you continue your idea with Pharazon and Miriel that you established in "Alliance". I loved that story so much. I love the idea that the Faithful are the ones who made the story that Pharazon forced her, seems very plausible to me, especially to protect Elentir's pride. I was very happy to see how you portray Miril as a strong Queen, and woman, that really she sets the campagin to Middle earth in motion.

I really really like that you show how that Miriel and Pharazon felt opression from both the Faithful AND the King's Men. One wanted to make her a figurehead, as you said, and the other wanted her dead. Loved this. Adore your inspirations from Carthage for Umbar. So is this how isildur meets Zamin? :-)

I was very much looking forward to this story and it both met, and exceeded expectation. Thank you so much for writing this! I loved reading it! I'm adding this to my story favorites.

Thanks so very much, Roisin - I'd read enough stories in which Pharazon was a sadistic megalomaniac and Miriel was browbeaten and the Faithful were saintly, and I wanted to do a very different take on it. Imagine my squeefulness when I realized that HoMe XII provided me with a canon passage to back me up?

Yep, this would be how Isildur ends up meeting Zamin. ;)

I'm glad you enjoyed this!

I don't even know where to start with what I love about this. First, I suppose, that you chose to write from Ar-Pharazôn's perspective, and without turning him into the usual megalomaniac bastard. (And just after I ranted in chat how much I was annoyed by the frequent clear-cut division between pure, perfect Faithful and evil King('s men) yesterday, too!) Seeing events from his side is very interesting.

Second, un-cowed Míriel. Even with the short page-time she gets here, you make it quite clear that she's neither a mere victim of her cousin's lust nor resigned to a shadow nor hating him. I quite like the thought. The biased chronicler of the Silmarillion would doubtlessly style her a saint who would never have loved Pharazôn of her own will, but that doesn't mean it's true... ;)

Third, un-perfect Amandil. Not that I hate the guy; I just can't believe that he was the perfectly meek, kind, gentle, poor unloved Faithful he's occasionally styled to be. Your version was very believable. And Sauron mistaking him for the King at first was priceless! (That scene was over way too quickly!)

Well, and all the small things. The description of Umbar and its workings was fascinating, and the allusions to Pharazôn's height (or lack thereof) were highly entertaining. And I liked the frequent italics in Pharazôn's thought. I could practically hear his voice!

In conclusion, wonderful work!

Thanks very much, Lyra - I'd actually attempted to write this whole thing several times from different POVs, and it just didn't feel right until I crawled into Pharazon's head. I've been sort of curious on other perspectives of the 'histories' we're presented really ever since I read the Silm for the first time - it was right around then that I realized that the history books taught one thing about the Mexican-American War in the 1840s, but the Mexican people themselves had a very different take on things (my Spanish teachers didn't like the history books very much). That made me sort of look at the Silm and say 'but what would Pharazon say?' or for that matter at LOTR and ask 'but were the Southrons really that evil?'

I'm very glad you enjoyed this!

Absolutely wonderful! It was fantastic to see Pharazon in his element, so competent and confident and ruthless if he has to be. This story was interesting in many levels, but I particularly enjoyed the other take on his marriage at work, as well as the view on the situation with the Faithful from the other side. I also loved to finally get a peek at that conversation between P and Sauron, when S surrenders to him. What a credible, believable, intriguing, convincing job you've done in bringing this tiugh campaign to life. Thanks for a wonderful story!

I love that Pharazôn *doesn't* want war, for as he aptly points out here, he has problems enough at home. I appreciate your nod to the fact that it was the Faithful who wrote the "Akallabêth" and the biases they held.

I adore the play you make with the title with Elendil's sons as hostages, in addition to Sauron.

I snickered when Sauron addressed Amandil first.

“And how do I know that an offer of aid to my citizens will not ultimately lead to an invasion?” I asked.

*whistles innocently* Well, it wasn't an invasion of Númenor…

Ah, Pharazôn-- I now must wonder what Amandil would have done, and if you would have had the gumption to do it if Sauron had begun helping you by then.

Foreboding is right!

Thank you, Indy! As I think I've said elsewhere, realizing at a reasonably young age that the people who win a war write the history books (or in the case of the Akallabeth, the ones who survived to found new realms in the north) made me wonder what story the other side might tell. It's been a great deal of fun exploring the possibilities, and I'm glad you enjoyed it!

And I'm gratified you picked up on the extra meaning of 'hostage.' Heee.

What I love about your stories, and this one is no exception, is that you don't follow that sort of 'mainstream' in f-fiction, which portrays the chacterters like old western movies do: the bad are clad in black, and the good -- in white. No, no, no. The Faithful aren't saints here, and the bad aren't monsters.

The last lines are perfect, both as a conclusion and foreboding.

Very intriguing, well done stuff. :)