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Yipes, the tension and frustration just radiates off Feanor here. Clearly he's still grieving and longing for Miriel - and who could blame him? On the other hand, I wonder if Finwe will later regret the way this conversation turned out.

“Fëanáro, I am referring to you. Am I to lose my son?”

Possibly my favourite line, but I thought this whole piece was well done. The dialogue was sharp, biting and fast-paced,just as it should be. Nice work!