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SkyEventide has requested the following types of constructive criticism on this fanwork: Pacing, Spelling, Grammar, and Mechanics. All constructive criticism must follow our diplomacy guidelines.


Oh my, you have met that challenge very thoroughly indeed!

(Speaking as someone who chickened out and requested a prompt that was not NSFW.)

Very clever how you twisted LaCE for extra kink and really good use of the prompt image.