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Good to know I achieved my aim then XD

I know the siege of Imladris ends comparatively happily, but Celebrían and Ereinion of course don't, and that worry was something I wanted to convey here.

I think that "hovering over the edge" feeling of not knowing whether you will fall or fly is difficult to write, but also really exciting.

A very tense and anxious situation! Fortunately, we know that they will succeed in raising the siege. (I assume that is still the case, even in this AU?)

I like the friendship between Ereinion and Celebrian here and your ideas about Celebrian as a healer.