From Crystal Fountains Unfailing by Lindariel

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Fanwork Notes

My stories of Galadriel and Celeborn grow out of the last written of all Tolkien's ideas about them, which was laid out in Unfinished Tales -- a version with a very different beginning from that in the Silmarillion.

Year of the Sun 20, the evening before the Mereth Aderthad.

Fanwork Information

Summary:

Alatáriel and Teleporno encounter the Falls of Ivrin.

Major Characters: Celeborn, Galadriel

Major Relationships: Celeborn/Galadriel

Artwork Type: No artwork type listed

Genre: Erotica, Het, Hurt/Comfort, Romance

Challenges: Holiday Party, Kings & Kink

Rating: Teens

Warnings:

This fanwork belongs to the series

Chapters: 2 Word Count: 2, 687
Posted on 10 September 2021 Updated on 16 November 2021

This fanwork is complete.

From Crystal Fountains Unfailing

Read From Crystal Fountains Unfailing

The Source of Narog poured in many silver rivulets down the sheer grey cliffs of the Ered Wethrin. The waters converged on a narrow ledge before spilling smoothly into a deep natural stone basin in a low hollow set about with fir and willow trees. To the east of the hollow, where the trees ended and the ground was more level, daffodils dotted the meadows, waxy white near the water but shifting to bright yellow farther away from the water. One last tendril of their musky fragrance lazed across the meadow as the sun disappeared behind the mountains.

Avenues of tents stretched across the near end of the meadow. Some clustered around bright banners, while others were less regimented. An unceasing line of Elves -- Noldor, Grey-Elves, Green-Elves and Falathrim -- moved to and fro between the waterfall and the camp, all bearing vessels -- chased silver ulmali, fine glazed and thick unglazed clay jugs, carved wooden buckets, even a few treasured glass carafes -- to catch the cold mountain spring water.

From her seat in a pavilion pitched under the blue and silver banner of Ñolofinwë, Alatáriel watched the impromptu parade intently. The High King of the Noldor had well chosen the site for tomorrow's feast. The waters of Ivrin were said by the Grey-Elves to possess the virtue of healing, and Ñolofinwë intended everyone present to drink from them, including and in fact especially the two representatives Elwë Singollo had sent from Doriath. Would any fetch water for that standoffish pair, she wondered, turning her regard back to the natural beauties of the Pool of Ivrin, from which Teleporno was returning carrying a graceful Falathrin calph. She smiled as he entered the pavilion.

"It is well that Teleporno makes himself useful," observed Findekáno, "for he has scarcely taken his eyes off you since you came out of your tent." He was resplendent in sapphire blue and his famous gold hair ribbons, lounging crosswise in his father's seat and leaning toward Russandol sitting at his left.

Setting down the calph in front of Findekáno, Teleporno nodded. "This is the first time I have seen her wear her hair that way since--" he began.

Alatáriel interposed calmly, "since we sailed." Russandol's right arm twitched at her words, and Findekáno laid two fingers on Russandol's forearm. Russandol's lips tightened at the touch; he sent Findekáno a sidelong glance and nodded slightly.

"Yes," Teleporno agreed as he sat in the chair next to Alatáriel, "and it is so pleasant to see us all in festival array." He smoothed the pearled cuffs of his aquamarine coat, then stuck out his leg and contemplated it. "I think I have not worn stockings this bright since--"

"Since that time I dragged you to Itarillë's begetting day party, the one where everybody was supposed to wear green because it was her favorite color," Alatáriel finished his sentence.

Russandol brightened a bit. "I remember that one! I had a new coat--"

"With matching green hair ribbons," Findekáno said. "Redheads should always wear green," he said lightly, standing and reaching for the calph. He turned it about in his hands, admiring the glazed octopus that writhed across its entire surface before pouring from it into the matching vessels that waited on the table. He handed the full vessels around, starting with Teleporno. "Thank you for fetching us water," he said with a deep nod.

As they drank a harper began to play somewhere in the middle distance, and a singer began the evening song to Ulmo. It took a moment for Alatáriel to register the Quenya words after so many years of hearing the Falathrin version of the hymn, but she recognized the voice of her cousin Turukáno immediately. He had always been the most devout of their generation. She shut her eyes and listened, recalling her own encounter with the Lord of Waters and the Telerin prayer Teleporno had offered.

As she sat with her eyes closed in the twilight she fancied she heard it again, that sound at the farthest reaches of her hearing. More a throb than a hum, it sounded so familiar, yet so remote and fleeting! Alatáriel opened her eyes, quickly scanning the entire landscape.

"I like your ribbons, cousin," Findekáno said when her eyes touched him. He gestured to the silvery ribbons woven into the two side braids that looped to meet the crown of her middle braid, which was stitched through with more silvery ribbons. "Very shiny, but not metal. What is that stuff?"

"Oh, these? A technique I picked up from the Grey-Elves," Alatáriel said shortly, looking pointedly at Russandol who flushed pink, which showed well against his dark green outfit.

"Alatáriel did us all a great service the last time she came north, when she convinced the Grey-Elves to share the secret of their clothmaking with us. But I never saw any of their cloth as supple and lustrous as that," admitted Russandol.

"What's the secret?" inquired Findekáno.

"I prefer not to talk about it by night," replied Alatáriel firmly, managing to send her disapproving sidelong look at both him and Russandol at the same time.

"Never mind, Finno, I will explain it to you later," Russandol said.

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Later, as the careful conviviality of dinnertime lapsed into evening, Alatáriel sat barefoot in the open doorway of her tent, noting in her journal her recent observations about the olvar in the upper reaches of the Narog. Her choice had been to camp with her brothers who had clustered about their father's banner at a substantial distance from the Fëanorions, albeit closer to the High King's banner. The delegation of Falathrim among whom she had lived for the last 20 years were camped in a hollow circle behind her, under a banner Círdan had devised specially for the event; it had a Falathrin swan-ship and two dolphins on it, and every time any Fëanorion loyalist got near it he twitched. Russandol and Makalaurë themselves had been avoiding the entire area all day. To one side of her tent, she could hear Ingoldo talking with Artaresto and working out a particularly complicated song fragment on his harp. On the other side of her tent Findekáno and Angaráto were playing some kind of betting game in Aikanáro's tent.

She put down her pen just as Teleporno loomed up before her in the moonlight. He had taken off his fancy coat and looked distracted. "Can you hear it?" he asked. "The Lord of Waters is speaking."

"That must be what I was hearing earlier," she realized. "Of course! The Ulumúri! We heard that sound on the beach, after the Moon rose but before the rising of the Sun."

"He must be speaking through the falling water. Come with me! We will go and listen to what he has to say," urged Teleporno, pointing toward the hollow next to the cliff.

Quickly they walked through the daffodils and into the grove of trees. The willows rustled ceaselessly in the still air rich with the scent of firs. As they walked a vibration became apparent, distant and eerie like the sound of conch horns being blown far away. The sound mingled with that of the falling water as they arrived beside the pool.

The stone basin shone pale silvery grey; it was very fine-grained, worn smooth and roughly egg-shaped. Clumps of ninglor stalks, not yet blooming, grew here and there around it, especially at the shallow rounded end where the waters welled out and down toward their eventual meeting with Sirion. Alatáriel took a moment to admire the graceful reedlike shapes in the dappled moonlight and missed Teleporno stripping to his loincloth and splashing over to the waterfall. When she saw he was already in the water, she removed and lay her pearled white gown safely on the grass before wading into the basin clad only in her linen sheath. She moved nearer to the falling water. The cascade was twice her armspan across, leaving plenty of room for the two of them to stand under it side by side. She took up a stance beside him under the cascade, up to her waist in the pool, face and hands turned upward to the sheet of water falling from more than thrice their height, and cleared her mind.

The vibration intensified, not just as a sound in her ears but also as a bone-deep itch in her whole hröa. The sensations all merged into an impression of being contained and cherished by the water. After an instant, an hour, a yén, the sensation localized in her chest; she realized only in its loosening that something had been constricting her heart. She breathed down to the very bottom of her lungs as the vibration receded to a distant pulse, leaving her trembling.

"Teleporno, I have something to tell you," she blurted out, stepping back from the waterfall.

"And I you," he replied, still in the water.

"You first," she encouraged.

"No, you spoke first," he insisted, wading out to where she stood at the edge of the pool.

"I have been carrying a burden of guilt since the Kinslaying," she said in a rush. "Ever since my kindred attacked your kindred, I have been afraid for our friendship, afraid that you think less of me because of what--" Her voice caught. She breathed deeply, forcing out the last words with a sob, "the terrible things they did."

Teleporno reached for Alatáriel, and they went into one anothers' arms. He replied softly, "it is true that I have looked upon you differently since then. This is what I wanted to say to you. I knew you had nothing to do with any of that, and yet in my heart I have felt you shared in the blame anyway." Tears welled up in his eyes. "The Lord Ulmo has helped me understand that I was wrong," he whispered.

After a long moment of weeping onto each other's necks, they both moved to separate at the same moment, laughing in surprise at their perfect timing.

Teleporno moved to the heap of clothing he had discarded. He tried to step into one of his long green wool stockings, but it snagged on his wet foot. Patiently he began gathering up the length of the stocking in his two hands, sliding it over the heel of the foot and stopping to smooth it, then coaxing it over his dancer's calf and wriggling it side to side up over his knee and thigh, all while bent nearly double and balanced on the other foot. Alatáriel caught her breath. The two of them had been heedlessly underdressed or even naked in one another's presence many times in the past, just as any two adult Elves might be; what was it about this moment that was different? She picked up her gown and began shaking it gently as if to remove stray leaves and twigs from it, but that was just a distraction. She half-closed her eyes so that he would not notice her watching him from under her lashes as he tied off his first stocking and reached for the second one. Her mouth went dry and she stopped shaking the gown as the second stocking went on just like the first. Teleporno straightened up with his tunic in hand, and she forgot to breathe. Her gaze lingered on his smoothly muscled torso as he stretched his arms over his head to put it on. His silver head, gleaming even when wet, emerged from the tunic. He shook himself, smiling as the tunic clung to his wet hips, and the shape of his mouth made her knees go weak.

"Was the water not cold for you as well as me?" Teleporno asked as he slid his feet into his felt shoes. "I am wishing for my cloak, and here you are still in only your sheath!"

"Yes, yes," she stuttered, jamming her arms into the sleeves of the gown and overlapping the front panels, "the water was very cold." She secured the front of her gown, fumbling with the knotted girdle, and hugged herself for a moment, seeking to steady herself.

"Then let us get back to our cloaks," Teleporno concluded, reaching out a hand to her.

Alatáriel took his hand but did not move from where she stood. She looked in his eyes and spoke to him, mind to mind, for the first time: "You and I are guiltless of what our kin did to one another."

Teleporno smiled in pure delight, replying in the same fashion "we were not responsible for that. We are forever and only ourselves."

For a moment the Ulumúri keened louder as they stood looking at one another, then receded beyond hearing leaving behind only the sound of the Falls of Ivrin.


Chapter End Notes

ulmali (Q) -- flagons, serving vessels for beverages

calph (S) -- also a serving vessel for beverages

The prompt for this challenge was a NSFW quotation from a work of Victorian pornography.  I endeavored to turn this quotation on its head in as many ways as I could devise.

"Why, I know not, but I was instinctively prompted to feign sleep. I did so successfully, notwithstanding the passing of the candle before my eyes. So she at once commenced undressing. When her back was turned, I opened my eyes, and greedily devoured her naked charms as they were gradually exhibited before me. The moment she turned round, I was again as if asleep. I have said that my passions had begun to develop themselves, but as yet I did not understand their force or direction. I well remember this first night, when a fine ripe woman gradually removed every particle of dress within a couple of yards of me--the effect of each succeeding charm, from her lovely and beautifully formed bubbies to the taking off her shoes and stockings from her well-formed legs and small feet and ankles, caused my prick to swell and stiffen to a painful extent. When all but her chemise was removed, she stopped to pick up her petticoats that she had allowed to fall to her feet, and in lifting them, raised also her chemise, and exposed to my view a most glorious bottom--dazzlingly white and shining like satin. As the light was full upon it, and she was still in a stooping position, I could see that below her slit she was well covered with dark hair. Turning round, to put her petticoats on a chair, and to take up her night-gown, she slipped her chemise from her arm, and letting it fall to the ground while she lifted the night-gown over her head, I had for some seconds a view of her beautiful belly, thickly covered with dark curly hair over the mount of Venus. So voluptuous was the sight, I almost shuddered, so intense was my excitement. She now sat down on the bed to take off her shoes and stockings. Oh! what beautiful thighs, legs, ankles, and feet she had! I am now advanced in life, and have had many handsome and wellformed women, but I never saw limbs more voluptuously formed."

-- Excerpt from The Romance of Lust, Volume 1 (1873)

From Party to Party

This 500-word ficlet was inspired by the Holiday Challenge for 15 November, "You're Invited!"

Year of the Sun 20, the day after the Mereth Aderthad

Read From Party to Party

Teleporno stood in the doorway of his tent, watching the grey-cloaked and -hooded Elves walk away. Alatáriel rounded the tent from the other direction. "Who are they?" she asked, following his eyes.

"Those are the emissaries from Lestanórë," he said. "Daeron and Mablung."

Alatáriel's curiosity spiked. "They came to see you? What did they want?"

"Come in, and I will show you," he said.

Inside Teleporno gestured her to a chair next to the table. A silver washbasin stood there, half-full of water. Sitting in the other chair, he held out a folded sheet of paper and said, "they brought me this."

Alatáriel took it, brushing her fingertips across the linen paper to the broken wax seal. It was square, with a device of silver wings arranged in a circle to make a great eight-pointed star. She unfolded the paper, recognizing the cirth it was written in although the signature looked like a handful of twigs. Teleporno watched her frown as she worked her way through the dialect of the great northern kingdom.

"'Unto his kinsman Teleporno comes greeting from Elu Thingol, King of Doriath. I invite you to open the Gates of Summer with me at my capital in the Forest of Region.'" She put down the invitation. "The rest looks like directions. Exactly how are you related to King Elwë, again?" she asked.

"He is my great-uncle," he said quietly.

"Will you go, then?" she asked.

"I do not want to go alone," he replied, "but we could go together."

The words hung in the air between them for a moment. Alatáriel felt more than saw the words drop into the washbasin at her elbow; but then the surface of the water shimmered, stilled, and began to flicker with images. Alatáriel watched the images intently as Teleporno regarded her just as intently.

"Did it happen again?" he asked when she finally turned her gaze away from the basin. "Did you see things in the water?"

"Yes," she said, shutting her eyes the better to recall. "I saw a cave full of beeches, a bright figure obscured behind soft shadows, a white flower bobbing in a grove of holly, and someone with silver hair who looks like you. And I knew we would both be welcomed, and I would meet a teacher there."

"Is that how it works?" he pressed. "You see things and then you know things?"

"Usually it is not so straightforward, and I have to ponder the images for a long time. But this seems very clear. I think you should accept the king's invitation, and I will accompany you," Alatáriel concluded.

"Círdan says his queen is enswathed in magic," Teleporno recalled, "and their daughter is beautiful beyond all words." He reached out and clasped Alatáriel's hand lying on the table. "Elves speechless in the face of beauty? Unlikely."

"I am hoping it is true," replied Alatáriel, heeding only his first words, "and that she will teach me some of it." She smiled brightly at him.


Chapter End Notes

In the strain of canon this series follows, Celeborn is the grandson of Olwë.


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It's hard to tell because in my writing so far I've bounced around a lot in her timeline, and I still need to tell the rest of the Valinorean part of it.  But my version of her story has definite beats where she ratchets up her scrying ability later demonstrated to such effect in LotR, and I siezed the opportunity to make this be one of them.  I needed an invitation story, and voila!  It fell into my lap.  I love the challenges; they can be really serendipitous.

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I've usually envisioned Galadriel approaching Thingol and Melian, but this idea of them being invited appeals to me. I would imagine Melian also had the foresight to see what might come of their association.

I can guess at the bright figure behind dark shadows, but please tell me about the significance of "a white flower bobbing in a grove of holly"?

I like to think the strong connection that existed between Elwë and Nowë during the migration west meant that they would stay in touch a lot as soon as Elwë reappeared after the Nan Elmoth period.  So there's a strong connection in my world between the Falathrim and the Doriathrim, independent of the pearl trade that is, and it flows from the top.  I figure Nowë would write Elwë about his relative sailing over from Valinor, and how much he's teaching them, and so on.  I see Elwë as being interested in this relative who can bring him news of the people he once led.  He didn't invite Galadriel, although he will eventually be delighted to discover they are related and he will insist on meeting her brothers too.

Galadriel's visions are sometimes frustratingly metaphorical.  A "white flower bobbing in a grove of holly" is niphredil dancing in the Forest of Region; does that help? 

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I enjoyed your detailed descriptions in this. Cirdan's jab at the Fëanoreans made me laugh. And the concept of Ulmo communicating the truth of matters to them resonates with me. Despite having spoken against bringing the Elves to Aman, he just can't help intervening in their lives, although more by providing knowledge so their decisions are informed than telling them what to do. (Although it's pretty clear what he would like to transpire!)

Yeah, it's a whirlwind social life!  I haven't decided yet whether Alatáriel thinks she has time to go back to Eglarest and get the rest of her things before traipsing off to Doriath.

The visions are fun.  I'm going to be paying some attention to the strand of her story about how she develops her scrying ability.

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