Beyond the Western Shore by StarSpray
Fanwork Notes
Written for the Holiday Party prompt for November 18: By The Sea
And also for this past July's Tolkien Short Works thematic prompt "sea shell", as a response to Himring's wishlist.
Fanwork Information
Summary: In her wanderings through Aman, Minyelmë comes to the farthest shore. Major Characters: Original Character(s), Original Female Character(s) Major Relationships: Challenges: Holiday Party Rating: General Warnings: |
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Chapters: 1 | Word Count: 481 |
Posted on 18 November 2021 | Updated on 18 November 2021 |
This fanwork is complete. |
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Most of the journeys Minyelmë had undertaken in Aman since she'd emerged from Mandos had not been hard. There were many well-trod paths through the woods and hills, whether by Elves or animals or by the Powers for reasons of their own. But in the western regions the land was rougher and less traveled; no Elves lived there, and and there were many creatures strange and wild, and it was said by some that even the trees moved about and sang to one another in strange tongues. The wind blew from the west across hard rocks and wide moorlands, colder than the breezes that came off of Eldamar, and tasting of salt.
Minyelmë climbed a steep and stony hill, reaching the top with burning thighs and streaks of blood on her palms from when she'd slipped and caught herself on a one of the small, tough, thorny shrubs that dotted the hillside. As she straightened the wind picked up, blowing her hair back from her face and cutting through her clothes with a surprising chill. But she scarcely noticed as she drank in the sight before her. The hill sloped down, as steep on the western side as it was on the east, and beyond it lay a wide stretch of moorland filled with heather, all in shades of pink and purple and shadowed by the hills. Little Treelight found its way to these shores. Beyond the moors were dunes and beyond the dunes stretched a dark sea beneath cloud-streaked starry skies. It was strange and wild and breathtaking, and Minyelmë laughed aloud, startling a flock of birds into flight. They whirled up from the heather, circling around Minyelmë for a moment before hurtling off southward along the coast.
The water, when Minyelmë reached it at last, was frigid. The beach was not sandy but pebbled, the stones all worn round and smooth as glass. She pocketed a few, for they were not like any other stones she had seen before. There were also shells—many of familiar shapes, but there were some also of strange spiraling forms that shimmered in her palm, the colors matching the shades of the heather behind her, but mingling with silver and streaks of red. And as the wind shifted she could hear voices in it, distant and singing strange and haunting songs. She stood for a long time as the tides changed and the pale light behind her shifted from gold to silver.
Far in the distance clouds gathered and parted and gathered again; it was impossible to tell if there was rain. Beyond them, Minyelmë knew, somewhere, lay the very Edge of the World, and the Doors of Night that opened into the Void. The idea made her shiver, and she turned away. She was glad to have come, to have seen Ekkaia—but it was not a place to linger.
Fabulous descriptions! Very…
Fabulous descriptions! Very vivid imagery, I felt like I was standing beside her. It also reminded me of Tolkien's descriptions of when Tuor reaches Vinyamar for the first time.
Thank you!
Thank you!
Ohhh those descriptions gave…
Ohhh those descriptions gave me goosebumps!
Thanks!
Thanks!
I think this is a really…
I think this is a really excellent and original response to the "By the Sea" prompt!
And I see now that you stated here explicitly that this was in response to my wish list that you filled the "sea shell" prompt.
Apologies for missing that earlier!
(I did thank you over at tolkienshortfanworks but wasn't entirely sure whether it might not be coincidence that you picked up that prompt, as they do go so well together, don't they!)
places of deeper colours
I've bumped into this ficlet again and although the imagery has kept coming back to my mind from time to time, I've enjoyed it even more reading it again.
I think I relate so much because I always used to do just this myself: wander off in relatively unexplored regions alone, gathering bumps and bruises (evidence of fun-having-been-had), feeling the energising power of the wind, gasping at a new unexpected view that appears as a rise is crested, exploring the tiny treasures found along the way, selectively pocketing a few mementos...
These are the places where deeper thoughts take on deeper colours.
And much as I love them, I love knowing a warm home is also waiting for me.
Oh, fascinating! It's always…
Oh, fascinating! It's always interesting to see someone exploring the edges of the world! (Where is Minyelmë from before the Halls?)
Thanks for all your comments…
Thanks for all your comments! Minyelme was born at Cuivienen; she's Elmo's daughter, and was killed by a proto-orc before Orome showed up.