Rise before sunset by firstamazon
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Fanwork Information
Summary: A disabled young man is approached by a mysterious stranger. A triple drabble. Major Characters: Original Character(s), Sauron Major Relationships: Sauron & Original Character, Sauron & Witch-king of Angmar Challenges: Middle-earth Is Multitudes Rating: Teens Warnings: In-Universe Intolerance This fanwork belongs to the series |
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Chapters: 1 | Word Count: 602 |
Posted on 31 March 2023 | Updated on 3 April 2023 |
This fanwork is complete. |
Rise before sunset
Read Rise before sunset
“You are no son of mine.” The king looked at me in disgust.
My mother had pleaded with my father and king to keep their only child alive, disabled though I was. I had been born with legs but was doomed to sit in a chair forever. Forever pitied by my condition.
Oh, and how I hated their pity! I wished I could kill the disgust in my father’s eyes, and rip them off its sockets.
One day I was left to warm my frail bones in the sun, and a tall stranger approached me. I had never seen the likes of him before – inhumanely beautiful, like my granny used to say the White Demons were.
But this one looked like a god.
The stranger stood still by my side. He put a long, elegant hand at the back of my chair as we watched the sun sink behind the dunes. A golden ring glimmered in his finger.
“Do you want more of your life, little prince?” He asked with a voice like silk and looked at me without pity.
I frowned. How did this man – or whatever he was – know my deepest yearnings? Of course I wanted more! Before the words left my lips, he continued as though he had heard my thoughts.
“I can make you hale.”
My heart sped with the prospect. “Even to get out of this chair?”
“And more. I can make you walk again.” He stooped down and looked at me with such intensity my breathing stuttered. “I can make you king.”
I inhaled sharply. “What do I have to do?”
The stranger smiled with the corner of his beautifully shaped mouth – and inside those perilous eyes, I saw the things I had ever longed for.
“Follow me and I will give you everything.”
“You are no son of mine.” The king looked at me in disgust.
My mother had pleaded with my father and king to keep their only child alive, disabled though I was. I had been born with legs but was doomed to sit in a chair forever. Forever pitied by my condition.
Oh, and how I hated their pity! I wished I could kill the disgust in my father’s eyes, and rip them off its sockets.
One day I was left to warm my frail bones in the sun, and a tall stranger approached me. I had never seen the likes of him before – inhumanely beautiful, like my granny used to say the White Demons were.
But this one looked like a god.
The stranger stood still by my side. He put a long, elegant hand at the back of my chair as we watched the sun sink behind the dunes. A golden ring glimmered in his finger.
“Do you want more of your life, little prince?” He asked with a voice like silk and looked at me without pity.
I frowned. How did this man – or whatever he was – know my deepest yearnings? Of course I wanted more! Before the words left my lips, he continued as though he had heard my thoughts.
“I can make you hale.”
My heart sped with the prospect. “Even to get out of this chair?”
“And more. I can make you walk again.” He stooped down and looked at me with such intensity my breathing stuttered. “I can make you king.”
I inhaled sharply. “What do I have to do?”
The stranger smiled with the corner of his beautifully shaped mouth – and inside those perilous eyes, I saw the things I had ever longed for.
“Follow me and I will give you everything.”
Oof, creepy! I love how…
Oof, creepy! I love how subtly you've incorporated hints of who these characters are (I didn't look at the info before reading but I was able to catch on, even with my pitiful knowledge of post-First Age lore). I can totally see how this corruption would take place and I feel for the speaker.
Thank you, friend, I'm glad…
Thank you, friend, I'm glad you could pick up with the little info! <3
That insidious promise of…
That insidious promise of betterness that pervades so many things in life... what will you give up of yourself to have that promise. Like the ring, promises of power and victory and overcoming, to be twisted and corrupted. Oof. It's such an evil little thing, very fitting of Sauron in every way.
I'm so happy to know you…
I'm so happy to know you think it's very Sauron of him to make promises he won't keep LOL. Thank you for the comment! <3
Misterious, now I wonder who…
Misterious, now I wonder who is this strange white god... he could be anybody. This has really sparked my curiousity, even if only to make sure that this little boy will live a good life!
Oh... I'm sorry to bring you…
Oh... I'm sorry to bring you the news... but the white god is, in fact, Sauron. He is recruiting a young prince with the promise of glory and gold - and, when I wrote it, I envisioned he would be the future Witch King of Angmar. Thank you for reading and commenting!
oh... -.- I didn't really…
oh... -.- I didn't really thought of that. Again, really beautiful and capturing!
Oh dear... somehow I don't…
Oh dear... somehow I don't think that worked out quite as the mysterious stranger implied it would.
No, it wouldn't be that…
No, it wouldn't be that simple, would it? I can only begin to imagine what promises Sauron could have made to Kings of Men that would have sound appealing to them, aside immortality. Thank you so much for the comment!