"Extracts from the Noldolante as played by a small chamber orchestra in a seaside pavilion at teatime" & "No more laments for me" by Himring
Fanwork Notes
Inspired by the following Roaring Twenties challenge prompt:
Paul Hindemith, composer (1923):
This is a loving and artistic parody of some very doom-laden music from an opera by Richard Wagner.
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Warnings for references to character death and the First Kinslaying.
Fanwork Information
Summary: Set after the First Age, probably during the Second Age: Finrod is invited to a small private concert in Alqualonde by members of the Falmarin music academy. Introduced to a piece of music he had no idea existed, he is taken aback. Now with a related poem: "No more laments for me" posted as second chapter.
Major Characters: Unnamed Female Canon Character(s), Elulindo, Finrod Felagund, Teleri Major Relationships: Genre: Fixed-Length Ficlet Challenges: Roaring Twenties Rating: General Warnings: Check Notes for Warnings |
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Chapters: 2 | Word Count: 127 |
Posted on 6 September 2023 | Updated on 9 December 2023 |
This fanwork is complete. |
"Extracts from the Noldolante as played by a small chamber orchestra in a seaside pavilion at teatime"
If you have any trouble following this, please take a closer look at the wording of the title and at the Story Notes (about the prompt), which should help.
Read "Extracts from the Noldolante as played by a small chamber orchestra in a seaside pavilion at teatime"
Finrod sat stunned, not knowing whether to laugh or cry or what to feel.
‘Very well done,’ he managed. ‘Extremely well played.’
Elulindo flashed him a mischievous grin.
‘I thought you might like to see the score.’
He passed it to Finrod. It was, he saw, turning over the pages, meticulously written and lovingly detailed.
‘We don’t play it in public,’ Solosimpe cautioned.
‘Not yet,’ admitted Elulindo, sunnily.
Finrod closed his eyes for a moment. He had not seen Elulindo dead after the First Kinslaying, but...
Some Falmari were already dealing with the past better than he could have believed.
Chapter End Notes
The title of the drabble is, of course, the title of Elulindo's piece of music.
Solosimpe is my name for Maglor's wife; she is a member of the music academy and has featured elsewhere.
100 words in MS Word
No more laments for me
In Valinor, after both their returns from Mandos, Olwe's son, Elulindo, addresses his nephew Finrod, who lost a song battle against Sauron when Sauron reminded him of the First Kinslaying (in which Elulindo died), and says to him: Let us move on from those memories.
A tanka written for a tolkienshortfanworks challenge.
Warning for allusion to (temporary) canonical character death.
Read No more laments for me
I will not carry
the weight of blood-stained sea foam
into a new age.
Pitch laughter against long grief—
let no Wolf Lord silence you!
Chapter End Notes
The other tolkienshortfanworks prompt (beside the poetic form of the tanka) was: sound versus silence.
What an excellent response…
What an excellent response to the prompt! Like Finrod, I too didn't know whether to laugh or cry or what to feel. I love Elulindo's sense of humour, and relate to his way of dealing with trauma.
Thank you! This is the first…
Thank you!
This is the first time I've written Elulindo. My take on his character owes something to LadyBrooke's ficlet for Ekphrasis Week. But there was another inspiration as well, a Telerin OC, I think. (Not sure how to go about finding that fic again and in any case I don't think it would seem that close.)
I am glad Elulindo's way of coping made sense to you!
Elulindo!! Telerin snark for…
Elulindo!! Telerin snark for the win...and/or perhaps Telerin tenderness and emotional resilience. This is delightful.
Thank you very much! I think…
Thank you very much!
I think it is a mixture of all that: snark and resilience, with more tenderness for Finrod than Maglor, but not none...
This is amazing and…
This is amazing and hilarious!
(And I am so delighted to see someone take on that prompt!)
Thank you very much! Glad…
Thank you very much!
Glad you like it! I mulled for quite a while who would write such a thing and why in Himring 'verse.
(I imagine other fannish writers might go for Daeron & Maglor, but in Himring 'verse that would be difficult to make work.)
Brilliant!
Oh, this is perfect. Thank you! And thank you for posting about it with the youtube.
And yeah, not a thing to play in public. Yet.
Thank you very much! I'm…
Thank you very much!
I'm glad the video helped.
Yes, there are many in Alqualonde not ready for this yet and in Tirion, too.
Oh. Oof. Poor Finrod. …
Oh. Oof. Poor Finrod. That's such a strange position to be in. But I am glad the Falmari are coping well.
Finrod is very off balance…
Finrod is very off balance right now, struggling to assimilate what is going on.
I did choose him as the POV very deliberately, though.
Elulindo is his uncle. Finrod went off with the Noldor after Elulindo got killed and later lost the song battle against Sauron when Sauron reminded him of Alqualonde.
So if Elulindo implicitly tells him: "I refuse to be a bit player in other people's monumental tragedy. I refuse to be reduced to a tragic victim, full stop", there is a chance that it will actually help how uncle and nephew deal with each other, going forwards.
Of course, in a drabble like this, that can only be hinted at.
I so love what you did with…
I so love what you did with this prompt. There are so many layers to it, just like the Hindemith. In a drabble no less. Beautifully done.
This is so clever and so…
This is so clever and so beautiful! Well done! I loved it!
Thank you very much!
Thank you very much!