Fly Like An Eagle by Flora-lass
Fanwork Notes
Written for the Turgon's Rock Opera Challenge, for the song prompt 'Fly Like An Eagle' by the Steve Miller Band.
Fanwork Information
Summary: Fingon rescues Maedhros from Thangorodrim. Major Characters: Fingon Major Relationships: Genre: Poetry Challenges: Turgon's Rock Opera Rating: Teens Warnings: Creator Chooses Not to Warn |
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Chapters: 1 | Word Count: 277 |
Posted on 8 October 2023 | Updated on 8 October 2023 |
This fanwork is complete. |
Fly Like An Eagle
Read Fly Like An Eagle
I hear you.
You, yet not you - so tormented and broken that I can hardly bear it.
But it can only be you.
After all these long ages,
With the lies and the oath and the burning between us,
I know you still.
So I climb these hateful heights
As we sing together in our souls
Though our voices are spent and my harp long since discarded.
And as I see you, and the source of your anguish,
My eyes overflow and I can go no further
For there is nowhere to go, unless I grow wings.
How have we come to this?
That you should beg me to slay you
When I would not harm one hair of your radiant head
And only long to soothe your pain.
But I must shoot away the pain instead.
'O King to whom all birds are dear,
speed now this feathered shaft!'
I cry out, as my heart breaks…
But my hand is stayed, and I am borne up to you!
As yet I know not how.
Forgive me that I do not heed your pleas
As I forgive your deeds (or what you did not do).
You will live, if it kills me.
Morgoth's device has defeated me
But he will not defeat us.
I dash away the blinding tears, and pray to hurt you cleanly
If such a thing can be.
You fall into my arms, and we fly away.
Your blood spills over me
And its stain will never fade, not while your pain remains.
But I have you safe.
Your flame still burns, and so the ice may melt.
And time will heal.
(HelenFloraW)
This is wonderful! I love…
This is wonderful! I love how you incorporated Fingon's prayer to Manwe into the poem, and I particularly like these two lines, for the sound of them and the image:
So I climb these hateful heights
As we sing together in our souls
Thank you so much for…
Thank you so much for commenting, and for mentioning your favourite lines! Fingon's prayer was really the start of this for me, so I had to include at least part of it - I'm so glad you think it works.
Beautiful!
Beautiful!
Thank you!
Thank you!
what an absolutely lovely first post!
This is absolutely beautiful! I really love the way you've woven all the elements of the tale into your emotive poem.
I actually had the sense of Fingon penning this, perhaps while Maedhros is convalescing.
Thank you so much for your…
Thank you so much for your lovely comment. I'm very flattered that you think Fingon could actually have written it - but I'm also conscious that he doesn't acknowledge Thorondor! I'm sure he would have done so eventually - but at the time I think he may just have been aware of a great force which gave him the power of flight (and it was easier to write that way). :)
Very moving!
Very moving!
Thank you.
Thank you.
Fingon's voice is so…
Fingon's voice is so immediate; it really comes across.
I'm so happy you think so.
I'm so happy you think so.
This is wonderful!
This is wonderful!
Praise indeed! Thank you for…
Praise indeed! Thank you for giving me a wonderful prompt. :)
Both the content and the…
Both the content and the form were beautifully done - "You will live, if it kills me." oof.
Thank you so much! That line…
Thank you so much! That line gave me quite a start when it first came to me - and Fingon says it through absolutely gritted teeth...