Meet me in the Woods by daughterofshadows
Fanwork Notes
This is a Remix of cuarthol's sonnet Nan Elmoth.
Warnings for Melian using it/its pronouns for Thingol because she doesn't understand how people work yet.
Fanwork Information
Summary: Melian meets Thingol for the first time. Major Characters: Melian Major Relationships: Genre: Challenges: Understory Rating: General Warnings: Check Notes for Warnings |
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Chapters: 1 | Word Count: 146 |
Posted on 2 December 2023 | Updated on 2 December 2023 |
This fanwork is complete. |
Meet me in the Woods
I really wanted this to be poetry as well, but unfortunately Melian refused to cooperate :(
Read Meet me in the Woods
There was someone in her clearing. How strange. Creatures only rarely found their way past the bounds.
Melian peeked through the leaves, trying to catch a glimpse of her mysterious visitor.
Was that… an elf?
How peculiar! How exciting! She had never seen an elf before! She carefully inched closer.
Could it talk? Maybe it would stay and keep her company in this clearing. Melian circled the Firstborn. It had become tangled up in the web of her spell. That wouldn’t do at all.
She untangled the weave of her magic, using the freed threads to strengthen the barrier around the clearing. The Firstborn looked far too fragile for her liking. There was no end to the dangers outside.
As the last thread ensnaring the elf fell, it opened its eyes, and looked at Melian.
She gasped.
Its eyes were shining with treelight.
Oh no.
Chapter End Notes
The Oh no at the end is because Melian suddenly has these new and strange feelings she doesn't understand just yet (also known as falling in love)
What lovely curiosity she…
What lovely curiosity she has here, and her instinct to protect Elwe is golden. Oh no! A wonderful beginning...
Indeed! Melian is such a…
Indeed!
Melian is such a fascinating character and getting into her head is always a fun challenge for me.
Glad you like it!
Oh I love it!!! I love…
Oh I love it!!! I love slightly eldrich Maia and this embodies it so well. The way she untangles him really (ironically) captures the reader so well, and then he opens his eyes and she is caught as well! <3
So flattered that my poem inspired this!
Eldritch maia my beloved!!!…
Eldritch maia my beloved!!!
I'm so glad you like this! Melian captured Thingol, and then he captures her in turn, and I think there is just something about that, that is fun to try and put into words!
I really need to go and comment on your sonnet, too. I wrote this at 7am and forgot *oops*
Oh, this is beautiful. I…
Oh, this is beautiful. I love reading her version of events for once, and I love her innocent curiousity! Brilliant!
(And bonus for the ’oh no’. An enchantment of THEIR own making indeed!)
Thank you so much for your…
Thank you so much for your kind words! I'm glad you like it!
This is so lovely!
This is so lovely!
Thank you!
Thank you!
I love this so much!…
I love this so much! Especially the "Oh no."
Thank you! People really…
Thank you!
People really seem to like that last sentence! Can't say I'm complaining XD
I just love curious!Melian…
I just love curious!Melian who is so out of her depth with the Children that at her first sighting she becomes entranced herself!
Lovely!
Yes, it's certainly…
Yes, it's certainly unexpected for her! I don't think she was prepared for Thingol charming her right back, and completely without magic, too!
She really doesn't quite…
She really doesn't quite know what she is doing, does she, although her intentions are good?
You show it very well!
She doesn't really. In my…
She doesn't really. In my head, none of the ainur do. It's fun to explore how that impacts their interactions with the Children, because you are right, she does have good intentions.
Thank you!
I love Melian's excitement…
I love Melian's excitement and wonder, and the Oh no at the end is perfect.
Thank you so much! I'm glad…
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it!
I like how fey-like and…
I like how fey-like and eldritch Melian is here. She thinks she enchanted the elf, but Elwë’s eyes enchanted her as well. And she feels very protective.
yes, Melian is such a…
yes, Melian is such a fascinating character and exploring what draws her to Thingol is so interesting. Thank you for commenting!