Children of Aulë by cuarthol, Zdenka
Fanwork Notes
Inspired by the marvelous and painful insights in Not As Equals by Zdenka which rejects the Sindarin claim of mistaking the Petty Dwarves for animals.
I hope you read that story as well, and consider leaving a comment or kudos if you enjoyed it!
Fanwork Information
Summary: A moment between those known by others as Petty Dwarves. Their name for themselves is unknown. Major Characters: Original Character(s) Major Relationships: Genre: Family, Fixed-Length Ficlet, General Challenges: New Year's Resolution, Understory Rating: General Warnings: Creator Chooses Not to Warn |
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Chapters: 1 | Word Count: 101 |
Posted on 5 January 2024 | Updated on 5 January 2024 |
This fanwork is complete. |
Children of Aulë
(100 words according to google.docs)
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The small fire lit the glade with a gentle glow, lending warmth and comfort to the figures seated there around.
Næfr hummed a tune so old that none now remembered the words, but it brought cheer to the modest company as they ate a meal of roasted roots and lean rabbit. Those whose mouths were not full joined in the harmony.
After Alviss sucked the last of the meal from her fingers, she turned to Andvari to comb and plait her beard. Nearby, Ívaldi set his nimble fingers to the endless task of mending.
None heard the Elven hunters approach.
Chapter End Notes
Names taken from https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_dwarfs_in_Norse_mythology
Oh! That hurts. The horror…
Oh! That hurts. The horror of that last line.
(I knew Zdenka's piece already.)
Such a great fic! Thank…
(Such a great fic!)
Thank you, I'm glad that line hit as intended.
That was really powerful…
That was really powerful. You're always so good at little character details and you've used that to devastating effect in this little piece. I love all their names too.
Thank you - since Tolkien…
Thank you - since Tolkien used Dwarf names from Norse mythology I figured it was the best way to make them feel authentic.
Ohhh!! That last LINE!!
Ohhh!! That last LINE!!
Yeah. Thank you.
Yeah. Thank you.
Hoho, the suspense. I was…
Hoho, the suspense. I was trying to find the second chapter like a moron. Well done!
Thank you very much! I hope…
Thank you very much! I hope you read the inspiration fic, it's also a drabble and will hopefully resolve that missing second chapter feeling :)
Oh, so well done. Ouch.
Oh, so well done. Ouch.
Thank you so much. Sorry …
Thank you so much. Sorry (but not too sorry)
Oh no... That packed quite…
Oh no...
That packed quite a punch for only 100 words.
Thank you
Thank you
The petty dwarves are not a…
The petty dwarves are not a group of people I think about particularly often, but you've certainly put them in my mind now!
Love this!
Thank you so much
Thank you so much