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Ooooohhhh this is so beautiful!!  What an aching look at their love and devotion even through disagreement and pain, loss and death, and yes I love love love them reuniting again at last in Valinor <3 <3 <3 

....both pressing against the walls of the Halls of Mandos is so heartbreaking and poignant. And they eventually will hold hands again, in Valinor, even though the sorrow of what befalls their descendants and Doriath is still in his heart.