Orctober Instadrabbles by cuarthol

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Fanwork Notes

Prompts for Drowning Place (which also roped in The Tooth), Healing Waters, and The Burned Land.

Minor edits from the instadrabble channel.

Fanwork Information

Summary:

Three instadrabble prompts for the challenge

Major Characters: Finrod Felagund, Tuor, Original Character(s)

Major Relationships:

Genre: Fixed-Length Ficlet

Challenges: Orctober

Rating: General

Warnings:

Chapters: 3 Word Count: 304
Posted on 6 November 2024 Updated on 6 November 2024

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Drowning Place, and The Tooth

watchtower, surf, winter, sea

Read Drowning Place, and The Tooth

Icy wind pulled stinging tears from his eyes, so much like those of Helcaraxë it nearly froze Finrod’s resolve.  But winter would pass, spring would come again, hope was not so frail a thing.  He clung to these yet, despite their doom.

Far below, the surf battered the rocky cliffs, sending salty droplets to kiss his face even at this height.  Were it not for the thick bank of clouds he fancied he might even see across to the far shore of Eldamar.

Turning away, he walked back to where the first stones of Barad Nimras waited to be raised.

Healing Waters

waters, pain, Elf's, evil

Read Healing Waters

This was once a place of beauty.  He had heard the stories of healing waters blessed by Ulmo though never chanced to see it.  But the pain he hears in the stranger’s cries echo the evil which has come to this once sacred place.  Now the waters are stagnant and rank.

Tuor almost steps out of the treeline, but he is held back, a warning in the Elf’s eyes that says their paths may cross here but they go to a different doom.

It is a long time before Voronwë nods and they continue again across the now silent landscape.

The Burned Land

histories, burned, sacrifice, remember

Read The Burned Land

The watchfires never burned quite warm enough to dry the snowmelt from their clothing.  An angry bark from the overseer reminded them not to get too close, too comfortable, and forget their watch.

It was not long after the alarm was raised, a shadow caught sneaking across the road.  Iron boots went crashing through the brush after their quarry.

He saw them as they vanished down into the hollow.  He could gain a fat reward for this prize, a small reprieve from his miserable life.

The histories would not remember the orc’s sacrifice.  He had never trusted those promises, anyway.


Chapter End Notes

Building on inspiration from the last chapter - Tuor and Voronwë pursued by orcs who sought for Turin, a "what if" they were not caught because one of the Orcs let them go?


Comments

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What a great sequence of drabbles! You've really honed the craft. The contrast in the first one between the past, which Finrod even still imagines he can see through cloud an storm, and the tower as a symbol of present hope is powerful. 

I love the moment when Tuor and Turin cross paths. Bringing Voronwe, with his elven perception, into it was clever. 

And of course your orcish povs have become a trademark. I liked the contrasting tone of the last one. 

Thank you so much!  I love it when random prompts pull out moments I hadn't spent much time thinking about, or finally give me a reason to write something that has only lingered vaguely in my head.

I love how much detail we get out of Tuor's story, it makes me ache for all the details in Tolkien's head that he never quite got around to writing down for other stories and characters.  

I hope you read Grundy's also, her first and my first really go together well as we both took the prompt to a similar direction but very different mood.