Laughter and Mourning


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Amazing, how you've got both their relation to each other and the contrast between them, with the symbolism of the flowers and colours and posture! And so much thought has gone into that border, as well! As cuarthol said, both beautiful and sad!

I really love this. Lalaith is such a fleeting presence in the narrative, but her impact is so memorable. You've captured her sweet, innocent joy so beautifully. I love the contrast against Nienor's dark skirt, how she's striding forward looking up and how Nienor has her back to us, closed in on herself. Wonderful symbolism.