Comments on Freed

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I really love this! And actually, your use of the tenses works really well, putting the experience of Angband in the past, while the time in the forest becomes more immediate, and then ending with an acknowledgement of future is a lovely touch. And of course I really resonate with the idea of the sea washing off not just physical dirt but the accumulated emotional grime too.