Comments on Merry Midwinter

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I love all these snapshots of Feanorian family life and seasonal chaos! Last year's broken decorations, baking and singing, candle-making and falling asleep together, older brothers (and especially Celegorm) looking after younger ones and answering difficult questions, Feanor being pelted with snowballs and Maglor's snow-elf being mown down...it's all delightful, and I've really enjoyed reading each chapter. So lovely to have the chance to think of this family in happier times - thank you for writing this!