Comments on Celebrimbor: 30-Day Character Study

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....Itarillë might be the only other named child in The Silmarillion who was born in Aman and brought over to Beleriand with the exiles. As Turukáno canonically (I think) didn't like or trust the Fëanorians, especially after losing his wife on the Helcaraxë, Idril may not have interacted with Celebrimbor at all after Finwë's death. But I do agree that it feels like Celebrimbor never had a home, other than the forge. 

What an impressive work! Some very interesting observations, and a nice headcanon about him being red-headed. I especially liked the little scene with the poor dead pony.

Wow those character tags are so complicated, I can’t believe there are so many to describe the Silvergifting ship alone. 

I think it’s interesting how they spell versions of his Quenya name too.

I wonder if it might be argued that “Celebrimbor/Sauron” is a useful distinction between “Celebrimbor/Annatar.” Though from looking at various fics it doesn’t seem that it’s used to make a precise distinction in the way it probably could. 

Fascinating research! 

Wow those character tags are so complicated, I can’t believe there are so many to describe the Silvergifting ship alone. 

I think it’s interesting how they spell versions of his Quenya name too.

I wonder if it might be argued that “Celebrimbor/Sauron” is a useful distinction between “Celebrimbor/Annatar.” Though from looking at various fics it doesn’t seem that it’s used to make a precise distinction in the way it probably could. 

Fascinating research! 

"...that's what draws Annatar to him alongside his skill in the forge--the opening, the opportunity for his doubt to be played with and shaped in the way Annatar wishes."

Fascinating characterization. I so enjoyed reading your 30 day study and following along for the deep dive into aspects of Celebrimbor I had never considered before!