The Absence of Song by Elrond's Library
Fanwork Notes
A doubledrabble for the Dark Matter Challenge. Prompts were Motifs and Tropes - no water settings; Literary Techniques - no dialogue; and Words and Letters - do not use the word song.
Fanwork Information
Summary: For the Dark Matter Challenge, a double drabble on the nature of Creation. Major Characters: Eru Ilúvatar, Melkor Major Relationships: Eru Ilúvatar & Melkor Genre: Fixed-Length Ficlet, General Challenges: Dark Matter Rating: General Warnings: |
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Chapters: 1 | Word Count: 201 |
Posted on 9 March 2025 | Updated on 9 March 2025 |
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The Absence of Song
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Before the Music, there was Void, and They were alone in all Their dreams. Their dreams were fragments, fragments of a melody. Their dreams were vast and yet singular. Details infinite and brush strokes of a single color. Darkness and light streaked across nothingness. Fractals spun and expanded and contracted in an increasingly complex dance that was both everything and nothing.
Their being transformed and solidified by the whirling direction of thought and intention, became. They had created Themself, Their vast and singular self. And the realization of one’s own creation was a marvel. They sought to replicate. They fixated on the nature of Their fragmentary dreams and from Their thought: a wholly separate being. A companion with whom They could lead the Music.
Together, they joined their Voices and their thoughts, and they became more. They named each other, and in so doing, transformed and separated themselves further. Eru, the dreamer, the One and yet everything and nothing, They/He/She/All who was/is/will be alone. Melkor, transformer of thought into will and action, He who is/will be mighty/strong/rigid.
In the beginning, there was Void, and to Void they would return to one another.
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Oh I love this!!
I like it how you have…
I like it how you have written them as dreamers and used very visual and dreamlike descriptions instead of the usual music setting. Great use of the prompt!
What a great use of the…
What a great use of the prompts--this is so evocative!
Ingenious approach to the…
Ingenious approach to the challenge! Also, thought-provoking.
oh, such a great ficlet!
oh, such a great ficlet!