My Heart Lies Where My Eyes Alight by wind rider

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Fanwork Notes

Of the Prompt

 

In this prompt, five features of Ilmarin, the abode of the Valar Manwë and Varda, are ‘explained out’. The features can be rooms (or a part of it), decoration (tapestry etcetera), or areas (a quiet courtyard or places like that). There could be original characters – whether fully or borrowing the disused names from Tolkien – appearing here, but the main characters are Manwë and Varda. The timeline, if there is any, is given before each part of the five pieces; all pieces, however, are not closely connected in this regard.

 

Guide for Dialogues

 

“…(Valarin speech, spoken aloud)…”

`…(mind speech)…

Fanwork Information

Summary:

 

 

In nearly every home, its dwellers have rooms, items or nooks special for themselves. It is no different even with the greatest of the Valar, Manwë and Varda. These are five features of their home most beloved by the couple with their various reasons.

 

 

Major Characters: Ainur

Major Relationships:

Genre: Drama

Challenges: Fifth Birthday Celebration

Rating: General

Warnings: Mature Themes

Chapters: 5 Word Count: 7, 905
Posted on 22 June 2009 Updated on 11 September 2010

This fanwork is complete.

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I need a beta reader to help me with this piece up to the last (the fifth) content-wise. Would someone please? I need to delf deeper into the story in each piece, but I cannot do so alone, given my limited knowledge of Tolkien's earlier ages.

 


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(Wow! A review! I thought no one would review...)

 

Thanks for commenting, Ithilwen! :) I was inspired by one of Fiondil's stories - the Wars of the Valar - when I was trying to come up with something to fill my fourth piece. In his story there is a whole galaxy for the new stars, though. I thought about creating a less-grander 'greenhouse' and giving more details into the star-creation... so that was the result. LOL Not so creative after all, eh? *blush*