Half Past Ten in the Rose Garden by grey_gazania

Fanwork Information

Summary:

Caranthir discovers that this romance thing is a lot harder than it looks.

Major Characters: Original Character(s), Unnamed Canon Character(s), Unnamed Female Canon Character(s), Caranthir

Major Relationships: Caranthir/Unnamed Canon Character

Artwork Type: No artwork type listed

Genre: Humor, Romance

Challenges: 10th Birthday Celebration

Rating: Creator Chooses Not to Rate

Warnings: Creator Chooses Not to Warn

This fanwork belongs to the series

Chapters: 3 Word Count: 5, 845
Posted on 25 July 2015 Updated on 1 June 2022

This fanwork is a work in progress.

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Inspired by the Silmfic Prompt Generator: ‘I would find where she keeps her mouth, meet it with mine, press my hand against her palm and see if our fingers match.’ - Amal El-Mohtar, ‘Song for an Ancient City’


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Awww. You had me at the summary on this one--a decade of hanging out with unrepentant Caranthir fangirls has rubbed off and I can't resist anything romantic with Caranthir--and the story did not disappoint. Caranthir was adorably awkward, and I was so glad it ended as it did. And I see it is not marked as complete, so I'm hoping I'm not off-base in eagerly awaiting more? :D

Your Caranthir voice is so vivid and well-realised, as is the picture you draw of everyday life in Tirion--law firms and all (!!!). I loved particularly the scene at the end with Nerdanel and Feanor; it's such a fun family moment, full of both parental love but also personality conflicts and tension just like in real family relationships. Nice!