The Merchant of Valinor by Tehta

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Summary:

A series of acrostics based on the letters provided in the Tengwar challenge, telling the story of one enterprising Telerin merchant.

Major Characters: Original Character(s)

Major Relationships:

Artwork Type: No artwork type listed

Genre: Humor

Challenges: Tengwar

Rating: General

Warnings:

Chapters: 16 Word Count: 1, 992
Posted on 21 May 2024 Updated on 26 July 2024

This fanwork is a work in progress.


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Unque - Ooh, what a feeling this gave!  So much packed into such a piece, but I love that copper reference LOL

Aha - love that unconventional approach to vengeance

Essë - That name - especially the "bearing gifts" - very Sauron-esque! O.O  Very clever, sneaking himself on

Essë nuquerna - fantastic!  

I so hope you feel inspired for more, I am so in love with this series already!

It does seem that that plan of vengeance involves what he was pretty much planning to do anyway. But intentions matter!

Even when you are guarding a ship that you committed armed robbery for, frizzy hair is not a negligible factor and an exploitable weakness.

"Spirit of waste" indeed. So much laid to waste, so much potential wasted, then and later. Sigh.