Two poems for Daeron by losselen
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Summary: Two sonnets for Daeron: one for his joy and youth in Doriath, and one for his exile in Eriador, searching in vain for Lúthien. Major Characters: Daeron Major Relationships: Genre: Poetry Challenges: Rating: General Warnings: |
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Chapters: 2 | Word Count: 2, 910 |
Posted on 14 October 2014 | Updated on 14 October 2014 |
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Of Doriath
Read Of Doriath
Did ever sing the yellow-throated lark
So like the stars and tender stream of night?
For there beneath the elder-bowers dark
Sweet limbs of her that pluck from light to light
Its hues to band her long and living hair--
And stars upon her locks like water lay.
And words shall bloom beneath the hemlocks fair
Their will my lyre-strings and lips obey:
Like vowellèd music falling quick and oft
With woodnotes wild that minds cannot command.
They follow her, whose hallowed footfalls soft
Do touch like breaths upon the eager land.
O Doriath, a splendid ever-spring,
That flowers forth when nightingales do sing!
Of Eriador
Read Of Eriador
The twilit hours turn silver fast; a stark
And fallow sky. And wroth, discordant rains:
Rage! Rage! Rend these airs, choke the measured dark,
And drown the dying dusk on these dim plains.
O frosted, wretched earth, thou selfsame earth
Holds also the girdled Doriath, in whose airs
A throaty lark did sing in music mirth.
How sweet his song without earthly compares,
Yet chills me now like dins of rain. This land
Of dross, barbs of fern; these winds untame
That die in groaning grass-- had I in hand
The fairest hemlock 'tis so much the same.
The fair is fair as dust: A house of frost
For a wounded shadow. Lúthien is lost.
(1) Comment by Himring for Two poems for Daeron [Ch 1]
I like "pluck from light to light" and " touch like breaths upon the eager land".
(2) Comment by Himring for Two poems for Daeron [Ch 2]
A very effective contrast with the preceding! The ending, especially.
(Also, welcome to SWG!)
Re: (2) Comment by Himring for Two poems for Daeron [Ch 2]
Thank you! (Both for your comments and your welcome!)