One star less by Ariana

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Fanwork Notes

This is a translation of my story originally written in Polish.

Fanwork Information

Summary:

Shortly about burning ships in Losgar according to "The Peoples of Middle-Earth"

Major Characters: Amras, Fëanor, Maedhros, Maglor

Major Relationships:

Genre: Drama

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Rating: General

Warnings: Character Death
Chapters: 1 Word Count: 5, 366
Posted on 21 March 2016 Updated on 21 March 2016

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Well-done! You have a nice style - straightforward and heartfelt. I felt Ambarussa's sadness.

I enjoyed how you considered other aspects of the Shibboleth burning of the ships - the dismay at losing their goods, Maedhros' reaction to Feanor choosing only Curufin, and of course the inevitable sorrow and guilt for Umbarto. And the sons having to publicly stand by their father despite their private confusion and dismay - a very interesting point. The Shibboleth made the story of Losgar so much more messy and complex.

Thanks for the story. :)