In Arda Fair by Tyelca

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Fanwork Notes

For Poetry Month and the Strength and Beauty challenge; this is some sort of mix between free verse and cross rhyme.

Since I'm not entirely satisfied with the second poem, I had half a mind not to post it, but these two drabbles were written together and should, in my opinion, also be read together. Therefore, enjoy!

Fanwork Information

Summary:

Two brothers and their thoughts about Arda.

Major Characters: Manwë, Melkor

Major Relationships:

Artwork Type: No artwork type listed

Genre: Poetry

Challenges: Strength and Beauty

Rating: General

Warnings:

Chapters: 2 Word Count: 1, 317
Posted on 5 April 2017 Updated on 5 April 2017

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The Beauty of Strength

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Was there ever such beauty to behold
In Timeless Halls were Eru dwells
Where no substantial thing will stay
That was not also in Eä there?

Coming from Eru’s thoughts, ‘tis true,
But in Themes so rich and fine inscribed
The World that Is remains superior
By far to dwelling-place Divine.

For fair is all in Eru’s mind
Yet some are more than others so
When matter can build, can grow
Remain strong when left alone.

Hidden in number and in force
Lays a secret, dormant and still,
That to uncover means perfection of
The creations of Flame Imperishable.

Strength! To not bend before the wind,
To not melt before the heat;
But instead grow stronger still
In beauty and in brilliance.

          - So Melkor thinks,
And what is more? Others do think the same
In the Music he pours his soul by right
Until at last he is worthy of his name:
He Who Arises In Might.

The Strength of Beauty

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From the Skies and to the Earth
Then to the deepest places of the Sea;
Strength reflects what lies hidden deep
In both center and edges of the World.

Was there ever something more pure
Or more everlasting than what the One
with single word created? , he said,
And from imagination into reality it sprung

Forward into being, and Lo!
A Vision come true, a dream awake;
In and of itself. It moves and changes
By the strength of the unmoving and unchanging.

For nothing that is, was, or shall be
Is lacking in this one grace:
That it comes from Eru and therefore is
Beautiful and endures.

Beauty! The sole matter in this world
That is not marred from the core
And will shine and glitter and grow
In strength, and in radiance.

          - So Manwë thinks,
And in these thoughts he is not alone
For with him many others stand
Basking in what light remains
To illuminate fair Beleriand.


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Oh well done!  I really enjoyed reading these poems!  I actually liked the second the best.  I liked how you structured them with the first being the way Melkor thinks and the second, how Manwe thinks.  Of course Manwe's contains more positive descriptions and provides feelings of hope, whereas Melkor's is quite different.

Thank you so much! Yes, the poems of Melkor and Manwë differ in some aspects and are alike in others, because despite their multiple disagreements, they are still brothers in Eru's mind. Melkor's poem is also more individually centered, while Manwë's is much more altruistic, reflecting their personalities. Anyway, that was the idea behind it; I tried to stay in characer for both of them while waxing poetic xD

I really love these! As others have said they are juxtapositioned perfectly, so that you can clearly see the difference but also the truth in both of them. Manwë’s vision is the more obvious one to agree with, but it sort of makes you take a second glance to think about Melkor’s. I like how you made him not-all-evil while still seeming in character. Something about both of these creates really vivid images in my mind. In short, welol done!