Deep Roots are Not Reached by Frost... or Shadow by Raiyana
Fanwork Notes
The 'She' in this is my recurring OC Nínimeth(Glíweniel)
My prompt was this painting by Frida Kahlo, found here https://www.fridakahlo.org/images/paintings/roots.jpg
Fanwork Information
Summary: A burial beneath the branches of the Great Greenwood at some point in the First Age. Major Characters: Original Character(s) Major Relationships: Genre: Challenges: Pride Rating: Teens Warnings: Character Death |
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Chapters: 1 | Word Count: 357 |
Posted on 6 July 2019 | Updated on 6 July 2019 |
This fanwork is complete. |
Chapter 1
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The servants of the Dark One – yrc! – should never have been able to get so close to home.
And still it was her fault they were standing here, digging beneath the roots of a young beech tree.
Her fault, for not protecting him better, like an older sister should.
The singing rose around her, low and mournful, and she felt her own voice join them, lifting her grief to nestle in the branches quivering with a sudden wind. He was here, she knew, blinded by tears as they lowered the body into the dark hole.
He was here, and he should not be, she felt. He should have been standing beside Adar, who looked even grimmer than usual, as though part of him had died, too.
She knew how he felt, watching her mother kneel at the edge of the grave, a small basket beside her.
Red poppies, for his hair, and rowan berries for protection, a wolf’s fang, carved with the mark of their suddenly smaller family.
More branches, and handfuls of earth rained down, hiding feet, legs, body – curled up, for warmth or protection against the dark? – arms.
Someone screamed when his face disappeared.
She was surprised to realise it had been her voice.
The wind played with her own red locks, caressing her wet cheek for a moment that felt almost playfully familiar, and then it was gone.
The song rose to a crescendo, every voice calling as one:
“May you sleep peacefully beneath root and earth!”
It was half their hope, and half a command.
Too many still recalled the Darker Days in which the Dark One hunted The People for sport, sending their kinsmen back tainted by his malice, bespelled by the darkness within.
The first thrall was not discovered until it began to rot, the smell sickly-sweet and terrible. By then, it had taken several others beyond the protection of the People.
Now they buried their dead far beneath the roots of the trees they had loved best, and prayed that no Shadow would disturb them.
Or that the tree would hold them tight if it did.
(1) Comment by oshun for Deep Roots are Not Reache... [Ch 1]
That very powerful. OMG! So terrifying really though. Very effective.
Re: (1) Comment by oshun for Deep Roots are Not Reache... [Ch 1]
Yay! I don't often write terrifying things, but I think this one definitely managed, despite the brevity...
(2) Comment by Himring for Deep Roots are Not Reac... [Ch 1]
Both moving and terrifying.
I hope he did sleep peacefully, under his beech tree!
Re: (2) Comment by Himring for Deep Roots are Not Reac... [Ch 1]
I like to think that he did... even if his sister never really let go of her guilt :/
And yes, I admit that I was also pretty terrified by my own implications when this thing appeared in my head, lol.
(3) Comment by Lyra for Deep Roots are Not Reached... [Ch 1]
So moving. And I'm so sorry for the older sister here, feeling guilty. At the same time, I love your description of the funeral - we don't hear much about Elven funerary customs. I do hope the tree will protect the dead from the Shadow.
Re: (3) Comment by Lyra for Deep Roots are Not Reached... [Ch 1]
I think it did - and although funerals are for the living, the presence of the Shadow in their not-too-recent past means funeral customs are also a comfort to those who die, knowing that they're less likely to end up harming those left behind unwillingly.
(4) Comment by Narya for Deep Roots are Not Reache... [Ch 1]
Ooh! Creepy and sad. Lovely.
Re: (4) Comment by Narya for Deep Roots are Not Reache... [Ch 1]
:DDDD Creepy and sad but lovely is indeed what we're going for ^^
How haunting! The grief is…
How haunting! The grief is so sharp - not just for the person being buried, but for all the losses.