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I read this poem a few days back, at your LJ feeling a bit at loss what to say. This poem carries so much pain and feeling of defeat: it is overwhelming (in a good way). I think what adds to it is the meter in this poem, delivering the message in a strong way. In a way it is just like that, I hear her talking to me, accentuating those words and moments that hurt her the most. Maybe I’ve been listening to much musicals off late, but this piece has the feeling of one. This is a great poem Uli!

Thank you :) I am very glad you enjoyed it. I have to admit that the idea of writing this one scared me seeing it was built around such a specific qoute but once i started writing it just flowed. I don't think I did any tweaking at all, it just appeared in a state where I felt playig with it would have weakened it

*hugs* 

 

thanks for the fb 

Well, what can I say? I would like to offer constructive criticism, but... wow. The poem, despite being so strongly based on the quote I asked for, has a life of its own. You definitely managed to bring the feelings of the moment across perfectly. It's a painful, sad, dark moment, and your work takes all that and makes it more magnificent (not the right word in this context) - wow.   

Thank you so much for writing this! *hugs*

I am very glad you enjoyed the poem :) I admit when I first looked at the qoute my instinct was to scream HELP! and run *lol* But once I started writing it it cames suprisingly easy, possibly because I love that whole bit in the HoMe and knew it well already and possibly because I always felt a great sympathy for Nerdanel.

Thank you for the challange and so glad it was what you wanted

*hugs*